Reviews for A Moment
quoththeraven5 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
oh this was beautiful!
Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Aw well it hurts D8 I know it was all fixed but this was really stirring :0
this account will be dead soon chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
...Why do I get feeling you were bored halfway through this?

**Ducks behind Superman**

Nice story. Gotta go!

JuStIcE LeAgUe RoCkS chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
awsome story if i do say so myself
kate chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
hello! Good fic! write more chapters!
Beetlecat chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Good. I just have but one technical note. It was John and Hal that switched places, not Kyle. It *could* be John and Kyle during the fight when we wern't watching, but that demands too much thought on the readers' part.
The Dramatic Dolphin chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Whoa! That was awesome!