|Reviews for A Moment|
| quoththeraven5 chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
oh this was beautiful!
| Billie the fourth sage chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Aw well it hurts D8 I know it was all fixed but this was really stirring :0
| this account will be dead soon chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
...Why do I get feeling you were bored halfway through this?
**Ducks behind Superman**
Nice story. Gotta go!
| JuStIcE LeAgUe RoCkS chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
awsome story if i do say so myself
| kate chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
hello! Good fic! write more chapters!
| Beetlecat chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Good. I just have but one technical note. It was John and Hal that switched places, not Kyle. It *could* be John and Kyle during the fight when we wern't watching, but that demands too much thought on the readers' part.
| The Dramatic Dolphin chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Whoa! That was awesome!