Reviews for Playing Pretend
riverrat chapter 28 . 4/20/2016
Interesting pairing (Hermione and Percy). I did like your story overall but there have been a few things that were just a little too easy (like the Slytherins just suddenly becoming Hermiones friends, Percy is way too tolerant about losing her twice, the teachers approving of a teacher/student relationship amongst some others). I also suspect that you are American - not that it is a bad thing. It is just that you incorporate a few words and some things in your story that are clearly not British.
bartholemew chapter 28 . 11/10/2015
Hi, I loved it, but this last chapter you had Fred married to Katie, and then to Alicia, and it's a mess. But overall, très bon
guest chapter 28 . 8/31/2015
Really beautiful story, had me in tears too. I rarely cry in stories so well done
May chapter 28 . 9/6/2014
I actually enjoyed that.
Most SS-HG stories I don't usually enjoy but this one was quite good.
So far it's this one and that other story The Closet.
Cute ending and I'm quite glad that Hermione ended up with Sev!
Writtenaspr chapter 19 . 7/3/2014
I really like this smoothly flowing, gentle story.
Hmmm.. have noticed a few times, that you write 'anyways' for Severus.
It grates in my ears , because he is an Englishman, not American; it is a youthful expression, and he is highly cultured, mature, and takes pride in his hard-won accomplishments.
His wit is urbane, not callow or green. so , it just feels as if it doesn't belong in the outline...
sorry, but... had to write this tiny, little cough...
Otherwise , I adore the soft complexity. Write'S so enjoyable.
I like the shall/shall not between Percy and Severus. She is young and new to love,, of course she would want to sample different delights.
ThePenIsMighty chapter 28 . 8/17/2013
Aisha04 chapter 28 . 6/27/2013
It was quite good
Mallory83 chapter 28 . 12/9/2012
That was very good!
Otyu08gd chapter 5 . 10/28/2011
I loved the 'battle of wits'! Really funny!
Otyu08gd chapter 2 . 10/28/2011
This was a really cool chapter - I like how they trick Molly!
twilight-nerd-hp-luv chapter 25 . 7/21/2011
if anyone wanted to see Hermione's gown at the halloween party I think the link is www . malabar rentalgal / Historical % 20couples / slides / Turn % 20 of % 20 the % 20 Century . html don't forget to take out the spaces
astrangerhuman chapter 27 . 10/27/2010
Awesome! I lived the ending with Fred getting married (:
snarky snape chapter 7 . 10/24/2010
love the song used here it fits perfectly although its sad as hell!
Lady Anon chapter 14 . 7/2/2010
not the best out there, but definatly not the worst. Far from it, in fact. Definatly top 15; perhaps top 10. So far, anyway.
uptowngirl48 chapter 10 . 4/11/2010
"You don't get enough hugs," she smirked, right before throwing her arms around his neck in a hug. "Because you don't know how to give one back."

that's great!
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