Reviews for Playing Pretend
Angela molina chapter 7 . 5/10
I found a slight inconsistency in your plot line. In this chapter you mentioned that Hermione is too young to do magic outside of school, but in chapter 3 you said that she was 17. 17 is the legal age to do magic outside of school, so she wouldn’t be too young.
Guest chapter 28 . 4/19/2017
It had its ups and downs, and I could have done without Percy, but thank you for sharing. I really hate women who run to the arms of another when they can't have the one they want. Very bad form, and not fair to themselves or their partner. It's almost as bad as women who stay with someone who's wrong for them just because it's expected of them or they don't want to be alone. I really wish people would stop writing Hermione this way like she's weak, wishy washy, and doesn't know her own mind. She should never forgive Ron for leaving them on the Horcrux hunt, and never settle for someone who is less intelligent and courageous than she is. Ok, that's my soapbox for the day, thanks.
Guest chapter 23 . 4/19/2017
Yep, but your Slytherins suck eggs.
riverrat chapter 28 . 4/20/2016
Interesting pairing (Hermione and Percy). I did like your story overall but there have been a few things that were just a little too easy (like the Slytherins just suddenly becoming Hermiones friends, Percy is way too tolerant about losing her twice, the teachers approving of a teacher/student relationship amongst some others). I also suspect that you are American - not that it is a bad thing. It is just that you incorporate a few words and some things in your story that are clearly not British.
bartholemew chapter 28 . 11/10/2015
Hi, I loved it, but this last chapter you had Fred married to Katie, and then to Alicia, and it's a mess. But overall, très bon
guest chapter 28 . 8/31/2015
Really beautiful story, had me in tears too. I rarely cry in stories so well done
May chapter 28 . 9/6/2014
I actually enjoyed that.
Most SS-HG stories I don't usually enjoy but this one was quite good.
So far it's this one and that other story The Closet.
Cute ending and I'm quite glad that Hermione ended up with Sev!
Writtenaspr chapter 19 . 7/3/2014
I really like this smoothly flowing, gentle story.
Hmmm.. have noticed a few times, that you write 'anyways' for Severus.
It grates in my ears , because he is an Englishman, not American; it is a youthful expression, and he is highly cultured, mature, and takes pride in his hard-won accomplishments.
His wit is urbane, not callow or green. so , it just feels as if it doesn't belong in the outline...
sorry, but... had to write this tiny, little cough...
Otherwise , I adore the soft complexity. Write'S so enjoyable.
I like the shall/shall not between Percy and Severus. She is young and new to love,, of course she would want to sample different delights.
ThePenIsMighty chapter 28 . 8/17/2013
Aisha04 chapter 28 . 6/27/2013
It was quite good
Mallory83 chapter 28 . 12/9/2012
That was very good!
Otyu08gd chapter 5 . 10/28/2011
I loved the 'battle of wits'! Really funny!
Otyu08gd chapter 2 . 10/28/2011
This was a really cool chapter - I like how they trick Molly!
LostFangirl09 chapter 25 . 7/21/2011
if anyone wanted to see Hermione's gown at the halloween party I think the link is www . malabar rentalgal / Historical % 20couples / slides / Turn % 20 of % 20 the % 20 Century . html don't forget to take out the spaces
astrangerhuman chapter 27 . 10/27/2010
Awesome! I lived the ending with Fred getting married (:
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