|Reviews for Wormhole|
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/21/2011
great story, took me a while to fully read it. But it was definately worth the time.
p.s. what's with the kid? "even kids can smell pheoramones..." How did she know about that?
| nope at nope chapter 27 . 1/2/2007
'"Even kids can smell the pheremones, Like when y-" "Okay, next subject."' I can't get over the fact that this line makes me want to laugh until my sides hurt. I can't right now because I'm sick, but hey, it still has its magic. Last two lines, perfect to end the story. And the whole 'thing' between Ratchet and Angela...*ahem*. I'm not hinting at anything, what are YOU talking about? ;) I really like this story and I would definately recommend it to someone to read. If they've played the games and understand the storyline of course, but yeah, I've suggested to quite a few people to read it. I have but a question: When is the sister story coming? I REALLY want to read it! Ever since I first saw it posted on your profile I wanted to read it. (In other words, keep it rolling!)
| nope at nope chapter 26 . 1/2/2007
Ratchet's reaction to Ranaia is quite comical. Quite. (That was an understatement; IT WAS PRICELESS!) Anyway, I was kind of wondering when Ratchet would FINALLY ask if Angela would take a vacation to Veldin. Hehehe...Just MAYBE they should go check in with the Resistance.
| nope at nope chapter 25 . 1/1/2007
| nope at nope chapter 23 . 1/1/2007
I like how you so bluntly state that Nifleem was derived from 'Niflheim, a Norse version of Hell of eternal winter, blasting blizzards and blistering ice.' Very nice.
| nope at nope chapter 22 . 1/1/2007
I can't believe that Felix get killed. When I first read this, I thought that it was all of them to the end.
| nope at nope chapter 21 . 1/1/2007
I love space battles.
| nope at nope chapter 20 . 12/31/2006
Yeah, that is definitely the most pricelessly ironic line I've ever seen! By the way, I was just listening to a really sad song- it was a video game soundtrack...track, and its sounds so sad! I just feel inspired to make something the most plot-twisting, heart-wrenchingly chapter for a story EVER.
| nope at nope chapter 17 . 12/31/2006
Wow, I really can't describe how better your battles are compared to mine. I don't even have a few words on whose speaking! But that's to reserve space (I have too much, :S). All in all, it was a really great chapter (especially the end, :)). Would you mind reading From the bridge of an Acclamator? (Unless you've already read it of course) Thanks!
| nope at nope chapter 15 . 12/31/2006
Somehow I can see the Banshee's pulse cannon's fire perfectly. It just comes naturally. But I can only see the Banshee in blue. Meh, it still OWNZ (the Banshee rockS!) :
| nope at nope chapter 13 . 12/31/2006
The Banshee is SO SEXY! I- I'm completely wordless as to how to describe it! Except of course I now realize how much I've based the Artica from the Banshee.
| nope at nope chapter 12 . 12/31/2006
I'm at a loss of words. ITS SO GOOD! :
| nope at nope chapter 11 . 12/31/2006
Hehehe. Great chapter. I just think that maybe Ratchet should have taken maybe a few more seconds to recognize Angela. Just a thought.
| nope at nope chapter 10 . 12/31/2006
You know, catching a bit of history (especially Russian), is pretty sweet every here and there. I kind of find it amusing that whenever Angela goes to see Rusko he's always sleeping! and of course I know what happens in the next chapter, I've read this book...three times was it? It's still an amazing story anyway.
| nope at nope chapter 9 . 12/30/2006
Haven't been reviewing the past few chapters because its SOO GOOD! I have but a qeustion; is the gravity on the station off or is the station itself off? Its awesome either way.