|Reviews for Childish|
| QueenNarca chapter 3 . 9/29/2008
About time someone made Cloud not such a wuss. It's perfect and really funny.
| Aralaiqualasse chapter 3 . 6/20/2008
| Ferian chapter 3 . 4/9/2007
Okey, I am complaining, you should continue this or at least have a proper ending *pout*
| DreamGal chapter 3 . 11/26/2006
This story is great! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Is Cloud going to try to make Sephy jeleous? You must, I repeat, MUST update! You haven't updated this story since 2005! The suspense is KILLING me! Please, I beg of you, continue this story for all that my puny life is worth! ;_;
| tsuhiyo chapter 2 . 10/13/2006
Very cute indeed! _
| velfire chapter 3 . 9/12/2006
poor zack is going to have to run in -fear- from jealous sephiroth! hahaha. are you ever going to continue/fin this piece?
| ali chapter 3 . 7/6/2006
u are not updating...YOU'R NOT UPDATIN...whats going on? this story is going great why leave it like that?
its one of the best cloud&seph fics out there...u really should be writing more...
oh yeah! and cong on not mentioning c*ds name:) peachy!
| Angel Commando chapter 3 . 6/22/2006
Oh! Update soon please, because I'd like to read more! This is a cute story in my opnion and I REALLY want to be reading more of this soon!
| Jenniyah chapter 3 . 4/4/2006
woah, u did go the whole chapter w/out naming cloud...nice...
| scarlettHuntress chapter 3 . 2/10/2006
I think I've read this about twice. I just love the way you describe everything so cutely, and set the scene out for us, chappie 2 is my fave tho.
| Phoenix Noir chapter 3 . 1/24/2006
WHOOHOO! Go Spikey-boy. Nice story. I really don;t have any constructive critisism... Since I thought it was rather good... Sorry? -blinks-
Ookami: You can never just say 'Good job' can you?
Never. it goes against my code.
Ookami: Code? -eye roll- As his muse, it is my job to be enlightened to write... So you've helped.
| Sibilant Whisper chapter 3 . 1/5/2006
Lmao cloud...thats low. XD Poor crazy Zack.
| Rema Suzuki chapter 3 . 12/10/2005
Wow, and here I thought you were dead. Oo Guess you'reback. Awesome chapter, by the way. However, if you take this much time for the next chapter...The unspeakable will happen.
Anyhow, awesome job!
| Emilin Rose chapter 3 . 11/27/2005
About time. I was about to hunt you down and duct tape you to a computer chair.
| Leck chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
I love this fic ! Unfortunatly I can't all understand...I still have some dificulties with english
A quand une traduction en français ? (je réve)lol