Reviews for Forgotten
Galadeidre chapter 13 . 5/13/2005
Oh, wow. Great ending. I liked the dream sequencing and how she got her memory back then, tho i was thinking that hank may have had a larger outburst of emotion. but that's ok. it was a great chapter, and i laughed when i read about creed and steph hugging him. i wonder who this strong underground mutie is. will he be in the next book? and is sam's mutant ability superstrength or is it just me? keep writing! thanx! ~gal~
Snickle-Gigger chapter 13 . 4/1/2005
Aw! .

*fends off the warm fuzzies with a fire poker*

They're everywhere! o.0...

Galadeidre chapter 12 . 3/24/2005 i'm seriously wondering now if all of her memory is gonna click right in instead of just having it told to her...i like it tho, it's kinda sad, her not having her memory and all yet. wat's gonna happen? keep updating (s'ok about your com. breaking down on you - i have problems updating often for my stuff. it takes me about 2-3 weeks sometimes) thanks for the great read! ~gal~
Snickle-Gigger chapter 12 . 3/24/2005
Aw, how cute!

Great chapter!

Update soon!
Snickle-Gigger chapter 11 . 3/15/2005 sad. *sniffles*

Very real emotions you've got going there, though I had to admit you had me laughing when Sabretooth tossed her out of the cover of the trees, lol.

Good job!

Update soon!
Galadeidre chapter 11 . 3/15/2005
yay! she's home and has met everyone once more. i was almost thinking that she was gonna get her memory back when she saw everybody but that wouldve been too easy huh? and a little corny. i wonder how she's gonna get her memory back, tho. i had also been wondering how the others would finally find out that she had amnesia. good story. i'm glad u updated and keep updating! thanx! ~gal~
Galadeidre chapter 10 . 3/5/2005
Awesome...i love how u got sabertooth to come back into the story. its great. why is he in england. geez he's always spontaneously somewhere. and y did he decide to stick around with the xmen? cuz of the 'runt'? lol i love how u call logan the runt. kinda miss all the old xmen tho. o well. it was a great chapter! keep updating! ~gal~
Snickle-Gigger chapter 10 . 3/4/2005
Hehe...pickleweasel is a funny word, didja know?


Good chapter!
Galadeidre chapter 9 . 2/28/2005
o...this is gonna be one long confusing game of chase, i think. Its getting really interesting. I can't wait for more! keep updating please! thanx!

Snickle-Gigger chapter 9 . 2/27/2005
"But the call never came"

Damn, sounds like something from a horror movie, lol.

Good chapter!
Galadeidre chapter 8 . 2/24/2005
Neato! So yeah...she still has hardly a clue as to who the heck she is and stuff, and I have hardly a clue as to how ure gonna get her memory back. At least she's getting bits and pieces here and there. That's a good sign i guess. keep updating! thanx!


...if you want to, put little breaks or something like the asterisks sign or that huge line that's on the edit page for your scene shifts. just a suggestion! ;)
GoldenGryffyn chapter 8 . 2/24/2005
*sniff* that was sad...

poor steph...poor hank... *sniff*

thank's for updating! ...not that cliffie's are my friend or anything... i wonder how she's going to be able to tell who kurt is... or if she's just going to willingly walk off w/ someone who could easily be a stranger...

great chappie!

Snickle-Gigger chapter 8 . 2/24/2005
How sad...

I'm gonna go off into a dark corner and cry now, if that's alright with you.

Good chapter!
Galadeidre chapter 7 . 2/21/2005
Hey, srry for not reviewing any earlier. I've been sick for the past few weeks and school decided to give us a bit more work than was possible, so I haven't been able to read or review anything for quite some time. Neways...enough about me. I think ure sequel is awesome. I love how u brought Remy into the whole thing. And I absolutely adore Sam already (especially her baby talks) It is really sad how Steph cant remember a thing. How will she get home and regain her memory i wonder. I guess I'll jsut have to keep on reading whenever u update. Thanks for writing! Keep it up! ~gal~

ps. 2 things: Curious...when the doc and Remy met, how did the doc know Remy's last name? Did they introduce each other's names as they shook hands? And if it's all right to ask...there are some parts when u switch to different scenarios that can be confusing at times...i mean i normally catch on after reading a few lines but it may help to add like asterisks signs or something as a slight break in between each switch. just a small suggestion! its still good either way!
Snickle-Gigger chapter 7 . 2/18/2005
The way Sam talks and only Ruhko, and perhaps hank, can only understand her is just like "A Series of Unfortunate Events", with baby Sunny, lol. (The books, not the movie. The movie stunk. The same could be said for the Harry Potter movies. Ick)

Nice chapter!
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