Reviews for Bonnie Runs Away
lab1152 chapter 2 . 2/3/2005
One review said this story was sappy. So what, write this story the story the way you want. If it is well written and the way you feel go for it. Since I've been reading stories on FFN I've read sappier better and worst. Keep-up the good work.
captainkodak1 chapter 2 . 2/3/2005
This is building up well. Ron is sticking in there to be the person that he is. Kim does have a temper and in some ways is alot like Bonnie. If she could cool off a little once in awhile she might find a freind in Bonnie.
Alice Shade chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Unless this is an elaborate joke, which is doubtful... Too sappy!

Bonniedve told Ron to go fly a kite. Of, just for kicks, mightve seduced him. But she would be in no way sappy returnee.
Geor-sama chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Interesting, I'd vote for a second chapter. Cause I'd like to know how Ron knew where she was. Good job, no problems that I saw.
GargoyleSama chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Very good. I don't really know the song itself. But it seems to fit. Another chapter? Take it and run. I enjoy your work. Keep it up.
lab1152 chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
You started a story, that seems to say you have more in mind. It seems that this may be a Bonnie/Ron romance. Get her to stop Ron before he leaves the apartment. That is up to you, but you already have that plot line in you. write the story and good luck and I'll read it.
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