Reviews for Children of the Legend
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 20 . 6/27/2008
great chapter. no mistakes, miss spellings, or errors, sweet.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 19 . 6/27/2008
great chapter. "“I guess that he’s afraid his brother was hurt in the storm. Truthfully I think it is in his head, a bad nightmare,” Joe thought to himself.", the same mistake as i comented on in my review of awakening(chapter 16).
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 18 . 6/27/2008
great chapter. i saw some miss spellings.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 17 . 6/27/2008
great chapter. you forgot to use italic for thoughts this time. That was it then he heard it click. ‘Izzy was to hyper already,’ Joe thought to himself. "‘Imagine what another crest will do to him.’" is the setence.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 16 . 6/27/2008
great chapter. i saw an incorect format in 1 paragraph and sentences. you intended to use italic for thoughts, but used italic for each of them.

"‘It can’t be.’ Joe thought to himself. ‘It just can’t be a crest; it’s just too easy to find one like this. They are supposed to be hard to find. Then again we have been looking for the crests for over a month.’" is the paragraph, and "‘Phew, that was close’ Joe though to himself." is the sentence.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 15 . 6/27/2008
great chapter.
Captain Kork chapter 25 . 6/21/2008
this is a cool story! will you write more?
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 14 . 6/17/2008
great chapter, and bokomon says "o beens".
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 13 . 6/17/2008
great chapter. a bit of tamers in this chapter(Mr. Matsuki, takato)?
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 12 . 6/17/2008
great chapter, and 02/04 fics ROCK! what's your opinion of 02/03 fics?
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 11 . 6/16/2008
freat chapter.

"Bonnie Mizuhara AsakuraI don’t really like reading yaoi so I’m not going to write something I don’t like." same here, and does that aply to yuri(girl/girl pairrings), as well?
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 10 . 6/16/2008
great chapter.
takuya chapter 25 . 6/12/2008
that was a mega chapter i really did love every words cant wait for more
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 9 . 5/27/2008
great chapter.
HELL'S APOCALYPSE chapter 8 . 5/27/2008
great chapter.
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