Reviews for Broken
congratsifyoufoundthis chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
Well, you had a lot of typos. Like suppose is sappose and plan is plain and months is mounths. You just need to fix that.
skatergirl13 chapter 3 . 3/2/2005
oh, it's getting hot huh?

Good work.
puppiescute a.k.a. Mic Mic chapter 3 . 2/24/2005
Oh no! That was so sweet until Helga left. Why would she leave. I wonder why I wonder I wonder I wonder.
Alice Shade chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
Why dont you do some spellcheck?

Honestly, some typos are fine, but typo each line, and almost absent punctuation... Its impossible to read.

Besides - heres a question for you. How many there are HelgaXArnold stories? Maybe it would be funnier to try for something different...

Use your imagination.
King Cheetah chapter 3 . 2/3/2005
WOO! Spicey... SPELL CHECK! _

Onward to Chapter 4

Your humble servant,

King Cheetah
DarthRoden76 chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Greetings!

So far so good, you have me hooked...cant wait to read more. Oh if you have time, be sure to read my fanfics and give me your opinions as well.

May The Force Be With You! Your Pal, DarthRoden (aka. Carl)
King Cheetah chapter 2 . 2/2/2005
Again, very nice but SPELL CHECK! _

Looking forward to Chapter 3.

Your humble servant,

King Cheetah
King Cheetah chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
Wow! Short... but VERY sweet. _

Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Your humble servant,

King Cheetah