Reviews for Retribution
JayLiyah chapter 6 . 11/19/2005
Interesting, I wonder who the sniper could be... you should update soon. Don't make us wait now. ;)
JadeAlmasy chapter 6 . 7/7/2005
wonderful update soon!

Squinoa4eva chapter 5 . 3/13/2005
yay, another chapter,i love this story, its my favourite out of the whole of (ok so i havnt read them all...that would be impossible) but it is god damn good, neb or should i say ben hehe. update some more, make this next 1 realy long so i can sit here for ages and read your words. :D

o how i love this story, i cant wait to read it all again. :D

PLEASE UPDATE somemore..ok i get that you are busy...but i wana read (sobbs)

sorry cant wait for the next chapter :D
JadeAlmasy chapter 5 . 3/13/2005
very good! from the earlier chapters i thought that it was Irvine but now im not sure! please please please update soon! i have to know what happens next!

Squinoa4eva chapter 4 . 2/26/2005
yay you updated again :D

sorry for all these update reviews i just want to read your masterpiece again. I will give ya a proper review shall i hehe. Ok you may already know but i LOVE your work. I can totally picture all of the characters and their locations because you put so much care into your story writing. I love the way your writing makes me laugh and makes me upset. I cant get into much fiction but the exceptional ones need creaditing. I think you have done a fantastic job on Bad Blood and the sequal's and i think you should write more. I dont really have any suggestions because my writing isnt half as good as yours is so i cant really give you much. I can only say i love your work and keep it up :D

o yer and by the way keep updating ;) (no i mean it lol)
JadeAlmasy chapter 4 . 2/17/2005
DAMN! I felt that blow! its just Damn! i dont know what to say. i kind of had a feeling that it would be Irvine just by the description that was given in the last chapter. im just shocked im a speachless shocked state. please keep up the good work and UPDATE soon i have to know whats going to happen.

JadeAlmasy chapter 3 . 2/13/2005
very good keep up the good work and update soon!

Squinoa4eva chapter 2 . 2/12/2005
damn it neb UPDATE lol kiddin ;) i want to read the story. It is the same story i read like a year and a half ago and i still remember what happens, you have got to update so i can read your wonderful work, i shall become quite restless if you dont update :D

o and is there another sequel to this i seem to remember another sequel *thinking* hm

update pwese
JadeAlmasy chapter 2 . 2/8/2005
whats with the astroid did i miss something? anyways keep up the good work and update soon!

Squinoa4eva chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
YAY finally the bad blooad sequel ive been waiting for this ever since i read it on icy brian's fanfic page (im sure this is the story i read, is there another sequel to retribution because im sure this is the story i read, it kept me hooked for like 8 hours :D) NEB u rule! o and hurry up with the updates pweze because im dying to read the story again :D
JadeAlmasy chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
i love it! keep up the good work and update soon!

Saiyru chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
PART 2! PART 2! I've been waiting for part 2 ever since I finished Bad Blood! Nice chapter, and I look foreward to your next update! _