|Reviews for A Legend of the Past, a Savior of the Future|
| Identical Twins chapter 22 . 5/29
San's one of the heroines who are far superior to Anna (Frozen), isn't she?
| joe.elliott135 chapter 27 . 12/3/2016
I surprised he died in the end. Great twist btw.
| joe.elliott135 chapter 28 . 12/3/2016
Great and interesting story.
| sephchipmunk chapter 28 . 1/24/2015
| Earthpatriot117 chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
can't wait to see what happens.
| NathanHale2 chapter 7 . 5/29/2014
Why does every single character do that ! Allow an enemy to live become horrified by their actions etc, etc. I understand and KNOW that it would be a likely reaction to this deed but to see it in every single story with different characters. It seems as if I am reading the same book over and over again just with different names on it.
| drizzt chapter 18 . 3/24/2014
i agree with author
i actually prefer this kind of fics because you can't change the story from the movie, you just can't. it would be a crime against anime.
| drizzt chapter 4 . 3/24/2014
add " " to people talking please
other than that really good
| Warpwind chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
I actually wanted to extensively criticize the main hero, but then I thought that in a way you are right. You managed to perfectly emulate a modern US highschooler of a below average intelligence in this story.
| Warpwind chapter 8 . 10/15/2013
the demon was scary without making all the overly flashy effects, that just make it cheap.
| Warpwind chapter 7 . 10/15/2013
soo, the demon basically saves his life... "noo, stop it, don't kill those good man who wanted to harm me and is probably worse than many maniacs from the modern world. You are so evil!" - ?
probably not an important moment, this being a fanfic and all, but still grates on me.
| GodzillaFollower1998 chapter 28 . 3/30/2013
Please continue this story! It's very good!
| writingpenguin chapter 2 . 2/20/2013
You know, the introductions should be shorter. I don't think it necessary to add all this before going into your main plot. Another thing, there are some grammatical errors and there are no quotation marks. Where are the quotation marks?
This is my opinion in the form of constructive criticism and no, it's not the flame.
I reread the chapter and all I can think of is that this is a filler. The beginning of the story and already a filler in place.
I'm just saying, shorten what doesn't need to be emphasized.
| Frozentongue chapter 28 . 7/20/2012
Man! I love this story! It's a shame that you doesn't write anymore
| jollybrowngiant chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Please update! i love this fking story and want an update nao plox!