Reviews for Early and Late
Dom chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Oh how sweet! And your writing was fantabulous D Absolutely brilliantly written _ Made everything worth-while to read. I adored how you portrayed Kenshin and Kaoru as characters. I loved the beginning, middle, and end. I loved how you made Kenshin a laywer (OMG I WAS SO SPAZZING OUT B/C KENSHIN SEEMED PERFECT AS A LAWYER IN REAL LIFE).

...*coughs* Excuse me. I just...lost composure for a bit...

Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and I hope you write more KxK in the future! I'll be going off to read your current multi-chaptered KxK now _
tcl7189 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Dani Rose Ventra chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
very cute
Sakura Kaoru-Chan chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
noname00 chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
i just loved this fic i usally don't read one-shots but i couldn't help myself after looking at all the reviews this got
Sword On Fire chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
According to my sister,who walked in on me reading this, you should've seen my eyebrows climb steadily into my hair as my face slowly got to matching my t-shirt. *fans self* Is it just me, or is it hot in here?

You write good citrus. I shall now refrain from singing along to "The Internet is for Porn" because my dad is home.

Please keep writing!
gwkitty chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
HAHAHA! That was great. I could feel the tension... You write very descriptively, it's wonderful! Thank you. ]
diddi chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
um..*blushes furiously*okk...that was interesting...heehee.
Miharu Kawashi chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
I really like this one shot. I'm not usually a fan of one shot romances because they seem too rushed, but I found this one very well done. Not bad citrus either. At least you didn't use weird terminology. I swear if I see another flower reference in a citrus I'm going to scream. I swear, I don't read romance stories at all! lol

I enjoyed the story. As usual, I find your writing very entertaining. I love your Misao, Megumi and Kaoru interactions. They always make me laugh. Ja ne!
kingleby chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
nicely done _ those two are so good together!
Miss Loquacious chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
*coughs loudly* Uh... that was interesting. *clears throat sheepishly* I uh... liked it? *blushes* I didn't know fan fiction had this sort of thing...
meg-chan chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
It was a wonderful one-shot. That left me absolutely speechless. There's something about your style of writing that I can't put my finger on, but it just pulls me in and I feel like I'm right there. Your characters are so convincing, I easily found myself watching this in my mind's eye as I read.

Could you please write a fic just for Sano and Megumi? Im a big fan of those and they have so few fics. Keep writing!
Chibi Binasu-chan chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Meh heh... that was good. It was a little short, but it was sweet. I like Kenshin's battousai-ness. Yeah. Yay! Sano and Megumi! They're so cute. There wasn't much Misao, but she was referred to in later scenes, so I guess she made her mark, though I would have liked to see more of her. And don't worry, you did a lot better than I could have ever done with the ... citrus... scene... ahem. (shifts in chair) Ahem...(jk) _'

Great one-shot! Your amount of reviews tell me that I'm not the only one who likes it. Golly, I wish I had your amount of reviews. (sigh) Anywho, great story.

Have a cookie.

Hakari Hana chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
Hehe! Love the story, it's so sweet. Anyway, just a random thought, but I always wonder how after a couple has a lemony night and wake up in the morning together that they don't notice eachothers' morning breath. I mean, I don't think they had any time to brush their teeth because they are otherwise preoccupied... Lol! I find it funny. Ah, the wonders of love, ne?
Leina chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
Stalker Kenshin! Poor Kaoru never even had a chance.
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