Reviews for From Darkness to Light
Azmodan chapter 2 . 12/15/2002
nice story... but i don't have the impression that malice and Zak ever was in love, nor could be!...
Azmodan chapter 2 . 12/15/2002
nice story... but i don't have the impression that malice and Zak ever was in love, nor could be!...
Gem-sama chapter 1 . 4/7/2001
There are several things wrong with this story (I won't touch on the poor English used, being that you yourself admit you're no grammatical scholar). The thing that irked me most was teh bad characterization of Zaknafein. You also made a hyperbole of how the drow (drow, not "drows") treat their males. Plus, if a priestess of Baenre could recognize he was a Do'Urden, she would most certainly recognize him as Zaknafein, the most celebrated male in Menzoberranzan. I won't go into the rest of the things that are wrong...In a nutshell, you have a ways to go in your writing.
Korisovra Ti'Kildust chapter 2 . 3/13/2001
Loved the story. (As always) Yep, it's me again. Bad Andy at your service. I still love your writing style and continue with the excellent work.