|Reviews for Cauterized People|
| majorsal chapter 8 . 7/4/2011
i read this fic some time ago and saved it, but just brought it out again to re-read. epic in it's darkness AND romantic love!
i 'think' i remember having a conversation with you years ago, where you said you were originally not going to have them end up together (they hated each other after the imprisonment or something), but you changed your mind while writing it. i'm really, really glad you changed your mind! instead of it driving them apart, you had them brought together in their shared dark-soul and dependence on each other. brilliant!
thank you! :)
| MajorSam chapter 8 . 7/3/2011
Just spent all afternoon/evening reading this... and now don't even know what to say. I loved it so, SO very much I just... wow. That was intense. I can't even imagine. The style of it, the kind of overview, rather than going into every detail, seeing how they're affected throughout a span of time... fabulous. Each adventure, piling up more and more... it was amazing. I thoroughly, thoroughly loved it, and am now even MORE inspired to write my epic Helen Magnus whump story... though it won't involve the same level of tragic romance, which now upsets me.
*stumbles away in a daze, shaking head*
| Holy Hannah chapter 8 . 10/31/2009
You've got a gift for writing angsty Sam. I enjoy your fluffy stuff as well, but this one really blew me away.
| tao chapter 8 . 9/21/2009
great story !
| Cassie Valentine chapter 8 . 7/22/2009
This was really good. I mean, really, really good.
| hayylies chapter 8 . 2/25/2009
| Zoser chapter 8 . 12/15/2007
Great fic - couldn't review before now too busy reading.
| BrenRenQoI chapter 8 . 12/13/2007
Truly a wonderful story! Thanks so much for sharing!
| a reader chapter 8 . 7/28/2007
THANK YOU for actually dealing with the CONSEQUENCES of Aliens Made Them Do It. So refreshing to see that happen in any SG-1 calamity situation, but especially in this particular one. A very engaging, jam-packed read with lots of great lines, especially the chapters with depressed/"fine, fine, fine"-Sam POV. I hope you continue taking SG-1 fic in new and exciting directions!
| Aria Naerwyn chapter 8 . 12/11/2005
Nice story! Loved it! Very inciteful of certain aspects of the human psyche. Keep up the amazing writing!
| Stargate-Luver chapter 8 . 8/24/2005
interesting, i think you got the personalities a bit mixed, but I liked the story, continue writing
| bigguy204 chapter 8 . 8/12/2005
Uh-oh, this has to be by far the darkest Stargate Fiction I've ever read. Very unusual approach... Not to mention that you didn't just kill one of the shows characters, you killedl THREE of them without as much as blinking...
| ForeverSg chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Wow, great fic! I always enjoy dark and AU fics and this one of the best I've read. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.
| KrazyKid197 chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
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| kat chapter 8 . 5/8/2005
I really like your story! Carter really turned into a killing machine! But it made sense, with everything she's been through. Their relationship just seemed to fit well, the way you wrote it it wasn't forced or corny. They needed to act as a unit to keep surviving!