Reviews for Happy B Day Shayera! A Beautiful present
HeavenShallBurn chapter 2 . 5/13/2006
Aw, that was Cute!
spiked punch1 chapter 1 . 8/31/2005
there is something called spellcheck please look into it.
SaMaNTha chapter 2 . 2/10/2005
jelow! heii da ztory waz very kool.. i luv it... ( mayb cuz i luv zurprizez wahaha )n zorry abt ur criziz w/ da final but it was k aniwai... n of course, ders nufin better dan a big n great zurpize n den oww LOVE KNOCKIN AT UR DOOR... take kare... x
balletangel19 chapter 2 . 2/9/2005
I love it. Nice done.
Figo chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I think this fic is mainly focused on Hawkgirl and the Lantern guy... I thinks there should be more actors here to give more realism. I think an orgy would be hot!... Besides of this. I think is a good beginning for a beginner...
MidgeeBlue2 chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
I just want to say that this a good plot, just a little confusing with all of the grammer mistakes.
balletangel19 chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
Lovely story.
stormcloud-23 chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
I love it ! Great story!
Agent Michael chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Good job with this really sweet story of friends supporting one another. Good use of the cast of characters.

However, I can tell that either English is not your first language or you have a ton of grammar mistakes throughout this story. I'm sorry.