Reviews for Viper |
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Nightcrawler X chapter 19 . 8/29/2024 Well, that was disappointing. |
Nightcrawler X chapter 4 . 8/28/2024 ah yes, "The Katana" the ultimate virgin weeb weapon! |
Nightcrawler X chapter 2 . 8/28/2024 eww, pedo |
Darknessdawns chapter 19 . 5/14/2024 Now this was a very interesting piece. Unfortunately it's only part one and part two is abandoned. Its terribly frustrating that we will never know where it could have gone. |
malaikabrooks9 chapter 19 . 3/18/2024 Love the story but hate the ending. Why couldn’t Harry continue on living and causing chaos and then fall in love with Voldemort who obviously wants him? |
Tony Moonstone chapter 19 . 12/24/2023 I am very disappointed this story stopped getting my attention 4 chapters ago. It had a really good beginning and then took a turn. I LOVED the idea of an assassin Harry Potter, but I'm sorry that the story didn't live up to my expectations. Take care and be well! |
Tony Moonstone chapter 6 . 12/23/2023 Wow, that was an intense chapter. This is a Harry character that I've never read about. He is devilishly bad and that'd good for me. The only thing so far is that you tortured one of my favourite characters and that is Dean, so it was quite shocking what you did to him. Never mind Weasley which I've never liked. Onward I read! Take care and be well! |
eeyoremoo.hb chapter 19 . 2/13/2023 confusing ending, made no sense at all. |
Kylad558 chapter 5 . 10/27/2022 To the people leaving spoilers *looking at you Living A Nomad Crisis* could you just like...Not? It's extremely unsatisfying to me to see what could end happening put into a small paragraph, it just ruins everything Sure you're trying to understand but you could either privately talk with the author about this or ask for a friends perspective to see what they think. It's also extremely rude to people who like to check the comments to see what other people think or just check the comments before finishing in general I can't make everyone who made a comment with spoilers delete it but I'd appreciate it if people stopped putting spoilers in the comments Thank you Sincerely, Kylad558 |
Jaye chapter 9 . 10/13/2021 I’m a stop reading here…I expected Harry to deal with mostly the wizard world for now and now you coming up with the muggle world stuff again and that is annoying. |
Jay Okami chapter 4 . 4/25/2021 well I'm only on chapter four but so far this story seems great. |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/24/2021 This is pedophilia |
GatorLHA2 chapter 4 . 11/5/2020 Bene Factum |
Living A Nomad Crisis chapter 19 . 8/18/2020 So... Harry was a yandere who held a possessive love for Sow. Sow was attracted but probably not in-love. Sow arranged to to have Viper killed when Harry paid too much homicidal attention to someone Sow cared for - Jenny Boot. Sow arranged for the death of Viper but was killed by mistake. Realising that the wrong man was killed Boot and Amos joined together to rid them of Viper faking the death of 'Jenny Boot' along the way to reduce suspicion. Is this about right or have I lost the plot completely? |
Angelov chapter 1 . 4/2/2020 I have to tell you that you helped me learn English! Gosh, years ago I searched for fanfiction of Harry Potter in English because I had already read the majority of the good ones in Brazilian Portuguese. Yours was the one I found online, nearly a decade ago! Because of you I was so interested in the premise and in reading it as a whole that I started translating each and every single word in English (at the time I didn't have good internet and I had to use an actual dictionary!). Thank you so much for your work. As you can see, I'm not 100% native in English, but my understanding improved astoundingly. I've finally found this fanfiction again and I'm in for reading it now that I can actually understand the majority of the phrases in here haha once again, thanks! |