|Reviews for You, Dying|
| Kristoffer Roux chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Loved it. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Beautifully written. Absolutely amazing. I love how you wrote this from Ron's perspective though not twisted by his thinking. Writing it how he sees it was a nice change. But the end was my favourite part. Truly wonderful story. I hope to see many from you.
| TryToTouchTheSun chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
I Am seriously lost for words.
That was so amazing, I loved it.
The strength of the emotions portrayed is insanely moving.
Ron's POV on what was happening was spot on aswell.
I felt for him.
I felt for them all.
| pyrotechnic x33 chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
wah! so sad! you got my heart really hurtin! it was really sad! but i cant help but think you did an excellent job and got the characters in play && the endin is so wicked! it aint a happliy ever after kind of endin! mucho excellent! i rate a 11 out of 10!
| justcallmefaye chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
wow. that is all that i can say. so i'll say it again because this is quite possibly one of my most favorite HP fics ever. wow. thank you for writing this.
| SilverKestrel chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
excellent - don't think i've read anythin from ron's POV quite like this before. it's really good. not sure whether you should add more chapters- were you intending too?
| romanticidiot chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I do not like angst. But I love your writing. Unusual combination ... but I loved this. Why do you have to be a journalist and not a novelist?
Random Uni Girl,
| the-faith-less-one chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Aw! Lea - honey! That was so sad, and yet so sweet!
Oh - loved the Buffy quote you slipped in there:
"fire bad, tree pretty"
Very nice! Well done!
| Jenna chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
Holy crapola. I mean really. Whoever that Pauline person is, of COURSE Hermione would say fuck. She's smart, she's not bloody Jesus. *sigh* Anyway, this story is absolutely amazing. I was crying the whole way through..it just moved me because it was so real. I loved it. Don't stop writing..ever.
| Jash89 chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
i never realized how very poetic ron was. anyway, i was just wondering where ron was standing while he was saying all this. other then that, update really, really soon.
| treebeard chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
i love all of your stories...just brilliant!
yeah, please update 'screaming on the inside' or 'you need to know!' those are the greatest!
| MoRbiD chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
wow. that was moving. you're such a talented writer.
beautiful story. keep it up. )
| Ronandchicken chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
I read this when you posted it but my computer wouldn't let me review. Finally I can, and I want to say...
That was very moving. I usually don't like Harry/Hermoine pairings, but there are a few exceptions. This is definitely one of them. Just... yeah. That was an amazing piece of work there. Is it one-shot or what? I feel like it implies continuning foward more, meanwhile, I rather like it where it is. As the author, it's your choice. I was just curious.
| AngelinaWeasley1 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
| Kiki Cabou kcabouhotmail.com chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
That was a remarkable piece of writing. Ron's POV is perfect, and the revelation is quiet and shattering. I really liked it. Great job!