I have to give this story a thumbs down. .

Thank god you didn’t kill time. Pettigrew made up for a little bit of what he did. Umbridge better be in Azkaban. I love that Harry and James are going to get their happily ever after! Great story. :)

You better not kill James or Sirius or Remus! Or anyone!

Uh, James had a sister who was sixteen? Or did you not mean to add that. Because you never mention her again or say if she was killed. I hope Snape keep teaching Harry.

Umbridge needs to step on a rusty nail.

Fuck Umbridge! She can die!

I thought Ron was going to ask James with Hermione? I hate Umbridge. Love that James stood up for Harry to Umbridge. Sirius better not die!

Damn. Poor James. James better be able to teach!

Poor Neville. I wish they hadn’t cut that scene in The Order of the Phoenix. It was such a great scene with evil and his mom and the candy wrapper in the book.

Fucking Umbridge, man!

I hope Umbridge burns to death. :)

Harry better not be banned from Quidditch!

Draco better keep his mouth shut if he knows what’s good for him.

Voldemort doesn’t have an invisibility cloak. Fucking Malfoy. Ugh.

Plus James is slowly beginning a friendship with Snape. He isn’t going to jeopardize that. I hate Umbridge.