Hey keep writing it's sounding like a great story I wish this chapter was longer but, oh well your the author not me. byez

Oh, I really like this story so far. I think it will get more interesting as we move away from the first chapter of OOTP and it becomes more of your own story. :) Good job so far, though. I'll be eager to read more! :D

OMG. oh yeah return of the jamester. *giggles uncontrollably. Coughs.* sorry. good update soon.

Merlin, that is an awsome beginning. This is a different approach to the James Potter coming back to life story plot the seems to be so popular. Please continue this story.

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I find this story very interesting. I don't think I've ever found one where he wishes he had a father. It's very good so far, please continue!

This is good! I love it! I can't wait to see everyone's reaction when Prongsie rises from the grave! Update soon!

Please, please, please, please, please update soon! Really soon! The closing of the chapter was so good! OK, now that I've calmed down, I'll give you a better review of this chapter. You portrayed Harry's grief perfectly, although I thought you would go into more detail with the Dementor scene. And the opening was somewhat, I dunno... it was like you were uncomfortable with the story. And then you got involved in it, and started writing with much more enthusiasm. I'm only guessing, alright? This story has promise. It's really good, although you've only written 1 chapter so far. Like I said before, please, please, please update soon. And I think I'm the 1st reviewer, so :does first reviewer dance:. Right, and you might consider getting a beta, just to refine some points of the story. Sorry for the long review. Good luck!

great story. i cant wait until prongs turns up! :D

i luv it...continue to write!