Reviews for Too Much To Ask
RevertedLogic chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
I uh...don't get it. Eric doesn't seem like he would do this at all. Maybe Kelso and for sure Hyde but not Eric.
Frozen Starlight chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Hon, you need some work here. I liked the idea, but this could have been a piece of a larger story. It's more of a longish poem or something, to me. Also, I don't envision Eric ever acting the way Jackie describes. Maybe someone else? Like...Hyde?
KEN chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?
Tuppence chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
A little short. Develop the idea a little, maybe?

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