Reviews for Divinely Unneeded
Starx chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
That's pretty good.

Though, I believe her grammar should be more normal, not completely though, if it is her thoughts.

Its just my belief though, since she speaks perfectly normal during the orphanage scenario.

Anyway, I notice you don't have one of the Serge/Kid fics I like on the C2 place, this is the link:
Tiger5913 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Aww, poor Kid... love at first sight, eh? I hope Serge will return her feelings. Hehe, I loved it when she said that line to Serge; I was thinking, "Oh, don't worry, he won't pounce on you... yet." _~ Lemon, please!
GaltFalseTruth chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Heya!

Kept it short, this one doesnt have alot to chew on, but the stuff is stringy! Deep i mean! You have to read what shes NOT writing to get the idea...or something like that

Regards,

Glaciours

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