Reviews for To the End
Murphy AT chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Brilliantly subtle. You don't have to say desperation for it to be strongly felt-and the profound grief of doing what's right and hating it-and the feeling of smallness, sorrow and aloneness. Brilliantly done.
ladybonerfarts chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Dude. DUDE. It was so angsty and so beautifully written and gods, I love your writing. So, so, so... keep on writing the RoyAi! Muffins!

- Selphie Anne

ps: Have I ever told you that you're my hero? xD
LoneWolfLink chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Damn. That was beutifully written. Bravo. Really, it was great. You write really good angst.

LWL
Haein chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
This story was... painful to read. But very good.
Zurizip chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
*grumble* You ridiculosly good fanfic authors giving me spoilers.

damnit.

holy hell it's amazing, though. Your writing style is just so descriptive without wordiness. I love it and can't wait to read the other stuff once I've watched the rest of the show...

I can't think of anything more I could say, so ... yeah. go you.
Ayashi chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
you deserve a lot more reviews than this...!

This... this was heart-breaking...

Even though I'm a fan of angst, I don't think I can handle RoyAi angst very well...
WhiteWolf0095 chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
waddya mean they both stood trial for the same crime? is that something metaphorical for love?wha?
Mimi-san chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
Holy Smacks! That was so beautiful! Sad... yet not to the point where I'm sighing in despair... but it was still very nice! I love this story very much! Wonderful job!
Lyrikkal chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Beautifully written. Though by now, I should've learned to expect that from your work.
Brigadier-Erin-Lightning chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
That was the best angsty/romance FMA fic I've ever read! Give yourself a pat on the back for using my favorite couple so in-character, and so perfectly...Now, I must go cry in the corner...
6StringSamurai13 chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Hrm...pretty dang dpressing...but so well done. Great descriptions that really pulled me into the fic. Keep up the good work, I can't wait till your next story.
Indille chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
But if you don't stop writing this so well I'll have to believe it!

Beautiful.
Kitti3g0Me0w chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
Perfect as always.
Mister Fahrenheit chapter 1 . 2/8/2005
Wow...very good. Tragic in the end. Not a tearing, obvious sadness either. More subtle, like a mutual understanding of one another's depression. That, I really liked.

Language was excellent; grammatically and in the way if flowed. Definitely top-notch writing. Good job.
Mandy138 chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
Oh, hurray! I do so love your little ficlettes. XD Nice to see the court martial aspect, too. I have a fic (short T_T) about Roy being court martialed that I hope to get out by this weekend. Glad to see I'm not the only one that's considered them being punished. D Great job, as always, and keep the RoyAi flooding in!