I really like this story so far, it's a great concept. And I almost hate to say it but I'm glad you made Jake a bit of a jerk. I was never really a Jake fan and I don't like him and Peyton together. I'm hoping Brooke doesn't remain Lucas' girlfriend for too much longer.

I loved it. Put Leyton together soon. Update ASAP

who wouldn't love this story?its really great and i so hope you're gonna update soon!i dont wanna say anything bad about it but i just noticed something,you might not know and i just wanted to tell you...lucas second name is eugene (karen calls him lucas eugene scott in the episode "don't take me for granted")and peytons mom died in a car accident when she was running a red light because she was late for something(peyton tells lucas in episode 5 of the first season)but,hey those are just 2 unimportant things,just thought you might wanted to know!sorry,i'm a total one tree hill freak so i know everything about it and such things come into my mind when i read fanfictions!but i really love your story and i hope you're not upset or anything!again:update soon!

Omg this is so good

Plaese up date soon

I cant wait

I love how lucas is peyton knight and shinning armor

Wow! Really good story, please continue!

aw I loved it. I am lovin the LP in this story. They are cute as best friends. Update Soon

That was awesome! Please update soon. I'm a total sucker for these best friend LP fanfics :-)

Great start. I love the twist with Peyton and Lucas growing up together. I hope you continue this!

great story so far! it has a beginning that i had never thought of... please continue and update soon! :)

I really like what is going on! Doing a wonderful job! Keep it up:)

I really like this idea. I hope you keep going!

that was good. just one note: why did you separate different years and then separate different parts of the night? i'm not putting you down. please don't think that at all. i was just a bit confused because when i saw the line that separated the different parts of the story, i expected a shift in time but it didn't happen towards the end. boy, that was a bit long. well nice work and update soon!

I like it. Update ASAP

aw I loved it. Update soon

This story is really wonderful. It's cute, them all being friends as kids. So sad about her mother, but I'm glad that Lucas found her. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read more!