My shit ass phone messed up because it's a shit ass phone any way sorry for the confusion and with that out of the way here is the rest of my review.
We all of course know that Hermione knowing Remus being a werewolf did not really (in this tim that is) have anything to do with eat she said but for obvious reasons to which there are many and none of them good. I know Pete is very curious about what happened to money but unlike the others Marauders and Lily who obviously wants to help Hermione out and are concerned for her wellbeing he is being nosey and impatient. I guessing that Hermione has figured out that she is stuck in the Marauders time and that it is now hers too, I wonder what else Hermione found in that book to cause her to throw it like that and yell out whatever it was I am glad that it finally led her to cry something that she desperately needed and of course there here knight and shining armer.

Somebody in trouble and it not any of the Marauders not as of now for it is being taken care of (obviously not in the way they would do it but that is beside the point) and that somebody is Snape. And the person his in trouble with is the one the only amazing and as of this moment very angry Dumbledore. Well I said it in the last chapter review and I was right Snape comment was his down fall in more way then one.

Lucius Malfoy is showing his Recorded male Ass-holeness AKA blaming the victim while being dominant and acting like his superior. Lily right Sirius can't prove that Lucius had any involvement in Hermione not being in class but as we all know Sirius is right he was involved he just don't know how. My hope (I know I'm not going to get it but I am still going to hope for it) that Lucius will not come to his treat but he a pig headed ping pong douche-canoe. So I hope for this (hopefully I WILL get this one) when Lucius does whatever horrible deed he has planed for Hermione he get caught and is in get his come-upings. Peter is getting on my nerves please tell me he hasn't started going to the dark side yet. Why did you have to go there Snape why? You broke your word to Dumbledore you do know that right? Plus you stupid horrible comment didn't have the reaction you wanted. Do what have you accomplished? NOTHING but some trouble for you that is.

I forgot to mention something in the previous chapter review I wonder if Sirius other reason for going down to the common room other then spending time with Hermione not only because that it something he would do once he knew about it but as be he does very much like her indeed any way as I was saying I wounder if the reason why Sirius went down there because he couldn't sleep if it was because of that HORRIBLE prank he did to Severus no the one that never killed him and could have put Remus and some very serious trouble. Of course Harry's parents and the other Marauders took Hermione under their wing the troublemakers and fools but they are quite decent a play saw someone in need of course they're going to help them it doesn't hurt that she is quite pretty and has a great I'll have any sense of hummer. While it is very funny that Harry is actually named after himself it also sweet and a nice way to honor Hermione. I can't believe it took me this wrong market I guess you can but I really hope that they find Hermione and find soon and unharmed. I wonder how long he's been missing I mean in Sirius and Remus time.

Well it only because a few weeks I say with I'm a few more weeks there be stuff being taught that Hermione hasn't lune yet or at least can do with more practice. Yet relational spoken to the teacher like that but the teacher didn't need to be that mean he could obviously see that Lily white worried about her friend I mean if he can't see that then he can idiot but anyhow he could only see that really wasn't worried about her friend he didn't need to be so f****** rude. Well look at there Hermione proved her worth take that Malfoy. But now you're going to do something stupid because you can't handle being outdone by a girl a muggle born one at that. Jet proof how pathetic he is he can't take losing so he going to do something stupid and mean he really pathetic he is ashamed that he was able to come a dad no wonder Draco so you know what granted I know that he learned it from his own father but he old enough now to nobody but he probably still in love of what his parents taught him that he refused to believe otherwise. I don't blame her money for keep on knocking in the library for trying to find a way back to her on time but she's not going to find it hopefully when she finds out that she can't she will find a way to cope maybe a certain Marauder can help her with that, and of course the others and Lily but manly that certain Marauder.

Good Hermione is in Gryffindor were she belongs and I bet that the Shorting Hat was going to put her there all along it just wanted to have some fun with her and after all everything it said was true Hermione would be good in any house this being said though the two houses that are more her are Ravenclaw and Gryffindor and I am not at all surprise that the Shorting Hat end with those two for it knows it stuff and knows it well. So Remus Hermione and Lily have identical schedules while James, Sirius, and Peter are different from those no surprise there. My question is however are James, Sirius and Peter schedule the same or they different I'm guessing there same. Sorry Hermione the library isn't going to help you but you find out soon enough. I have to say I got mad when Malfoy insulted Hufflepuff's at frist but after thinking about it be more of an insult if he commented them regardless of this though I am grateful to Hermione for standing up for them and I am not at all surprise that she did that is just the kind of totally awesome person she is. I do believe Sirius Is right about Hermione walking up and and looking into the file in the Gryffindor common room hope he or some else is there for he when she need them my guess is it will for the most part be Sirius at all because the other don't care because they're not all the case but because they don't know.

Lily reaction to finding out she is head girl is exactly what I thought it would be as her reaction to finding out James was head boy was freaking hilarious she said James name eight times that's at least that how many I counted. I remember reading why James was mad head boy and I agree with it but I still wish that Remus was head boy at do we know who took over McGonagall job wen she was killed and I am both equally happy and surprise that it's Sirius and am just as happy that Remus has kept his job as DADA professor. I know for a fact that tomorrow morning would be good in any house no doubt in my mind that whatever house he goes into he would make it better this being said I really hope that the house that he goes into it's Gryffindor even though me a fellow Hufflepuff would love to have on my house he belongs in Gryffindor it is her home it's being said though I'm not taking back that she would make any house great and I mean any house. I'm glad that the shorting hat isn't calling Hermione out on what she really is and where he is from it's most likely because what I believe anyhow at the heart can read what the person is and he can and it knows that her money is good person and so that's why it's not going home

I'm glad as I knew it would that Hermione spending the summer with Lilly had help her and it appeals that Lilly have the same thought I did about the Marauders help Hermione out. Am I right in guessing that the reason why the girls and the Marauders went to the Ministry of magic is because of the being old enough to learn how to evaporated? (Hope that I spelled that word right and that it means what I hope it does) I know Remus is studying and if Remus spend any time with Sirius and James then their bound to study or at least get an ear full of how they SHOULD be studying. I know I should have asked this question in the first chapter for obvious reasons but why were Sirius and Remus at the school isn't Sirius supposed to in hiding and didn't Remus resign but that everyone know the truth about Sirius and so now he did working at parkwatch or they get there for meeting they're going to happen soon or what's going to happen soon and if they are working there then what teachers are they is one taking over for McGonagall hate that he got killed I have to literally hate it I love what he would want my favorite teacher hopefully something happens to Bellatrix for killing her.

Poor Hermione not being is she in another time that is not hers to be in therefore it's unsafe fore her to talk about what she had to deal with it she also have to be reminded about Harry and how much he looks like his dad each and every time she looks at James and even though you haven't mentioned it yet she be reminded about how Harry have her eyes. Of course Dumbledore doesn't know yet where Hermione is originally from.I know he will soon and even if he already does know and even though it may hurt Hermione a little when she looks at Lilly he was wise to put Lilly with the job of taking care of Hermione for Remus is right if anyone can help her out it is Lilly. I hope that Lilly and Hermione do hang out with the boy over the summer I believe with their wacky behavioral their be able to get Hermione to laugh and smile but I think she should have a lest a couple of weeks before with just Lilly frist and possibly even longer than a couple of weeks. I know this would have if better in chapter 3 review but I completely forgotten to do it until it was too late any way, the person who Sirius and Remus were talking about was Hermione and Sirius was right Harry's Hermione and there Hermione (especially his) are one and the shame.

Yup it was as I feared there was more deaths the just Ron and Den heat that but it could have been worse I don't get me worng it horrible then students are dead I wish it wasn't that many but when you monsters like the Death Easterners it is surprising that it's not more. I wonder who the other eight were I also wonder if the two that were from Slytherin if they were trying to protect other students. I would like to believe so because I don't see any other students nor staff whether houses their from killing another student also not all Slytherin are horrible beings. So I was right the mysterious girl and now it is story time not just for us readers but for Harry and the Wesley's poor Wesley's this isn't going to be easy for the or indeed for any of the other families okay well on to the next chapter.

I wish that Remus would have accepted James and Sirius offers, I know that is easier said then fine for many people not just Remus but their is no shame in accepting help. I am guessing that this mysterious grill who fell from...well whatever when that bright light shown up is Hermione the way you describe the hell is how money hell is and the girl had endured and well harmonia could have enjoyed because of that horrible attack that happened at Hogsmeade. I see Lily still is not Kevin James the time of day well and that's a good name calling and stuff like that which I have no doubt that the dear and lovable James deserves.

I have absolutely no sympathy for any Death Easterners who got hit by a unforgivable curse, they are going after children who were unable to defend themselves they deserve worst if you ask is a horrible that Den and Ron were hit by that horrific killing curse I truly hope no one else was hit by it unless it was a Death Easterner but. I sadly think that will not be the case not by a long shot.I glad that Sirius was able to get down there in time to save Hermione and others too I have no doubt, I am guessing that Remus is doing the same but just not mentioned and or he is getting help worming those at Hogwarts about the attack at Hogsmeade . I hate it when that chapter start up happy and funny like this one and then ends and such disaster. Very cute on who serious and Remus were talking about I wonder we found out I guess we have to eat in order to see if we do or if we don't if that being said until next chapter. The way sorry funny mistakes in spelling or grammar I am mentally challenged with me spending very hard for me so I try to use my microphone and if you ever use them you know how they are so anyway I apologize again and I apologize in advance for the other reviews they're going to probably have it all you know what's.

thank you for your story!

Good job

Yep, you dont EVER piss Sirius Orion Black off