Hmm... this chapter says she hasn't cried yet but just last chapter she cried talking to the boys.

That was so different from anything I’ve read but I adored it. Very sad and happy and funny

I really feel like Hermione’s rant here is unrealistic. Yes, her finally snapping is natural, but the way it’s written is not. No one would actually list it out like this. Just constructive criticism, I really love this story. This part just bothered me a little.

I’m an avid reader of time travel Sirius/ Hermione fics and overall I liked this take on it. The plot line was a bit different than others I have read and I liked the changes. However there were a couple of plot faults that affected the story for me *spoilers*
- It’s hard to believe Malfoy would not have sexually abused her after trying to rape her three times at Hogwarts. She didn’t seem to have the mental issues one would expect to have after being kidnapped for 12 years by death eaters.
- The reactions from Remus and Sirius when Hermione eats for the first time after being rescued. I Don’t really understand why they think that’s funny and Remus says “hungry much?”... She’s just been starved for 12 years... just seems insensitive
Overall it was a good read but not one of my favorites.

Great story. Thanks for your hard work.

Thoroughly enjoyable story. Off to devour the sequel!

I read all this fanfic with all 56 chapters and love it so much!
Made me sad and happy at the same time!
Congrats!

3 harry 3

OH GOODNESS GRACIOUS

BLESSED BE LITTLE BABY DRACO not gonna lie I thought it would have been Snape or something even though that doesn't make sense bc he died... but I thought maybe his ghost would have seen something and helped Harry out.

"Growl." I'm dead XD

yo! Natasha! I'm shook.

PANDORA! 3

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