|Reviews for Web of Fates|
| Queen Bee chapter 12 . 9/5/2005
wonderful story please keep going.i just found the story and i love it.
| drake220 chapter 12 . 7/5/2005
i don't know whether i want to smack miroku upside the head or kiss him for being so sweet (sort of) at the end. i liked how you are allowing their personalitites to expand realistically. nicely done.
| drake220 chapter 11 . 6/20/2005
::snort:: Miroku was so pushy! and that was horrible to force his way into Sango adn Kohaku's day. i know he didn't mean it but still. Sango's reaction throughout this chapter was great. BTB, she should let Kikyou and Kaede know about how terribly that old client behaved. he should be blacklisted. Assaulting one of their girls on the street should get him thrown out of their books.
| drake220 chapter 10 . 6/7/2005
this seemed like a filler chapter up until the end. the dream sequence was nice and the rounding out of kagome's character was good too.
| drake220 chapter 9 . 6/1/2005
that ending scene was a tearjerker! sheesh! i wonder if sango had realized that miroku was intrigued by mystery, if she would have been more friendly. hmm. this being miroku, he'd have taken encouragement either way. nicely done.
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 8 . 5/17/2005
sweet! poor Sango
| drake220 chapter 8 . 5/16/2005
i know it wasn't intentional but there was some yoda-esque overtones here. something like, "not a good idea, it wasn't." hehe. miroku is just adorable! loved it. i have to say kikyo is the most interesting character- i love the modern perception of her old fashioned ideals. nicely done!
| drake220 chapter 7 . 5/2/2005
hurray! an update! i'm very glad. i enjoyed the chapter immensly and miroku and sango were spot on. nicely done. sexy without too much information. lovely!
| BleedingRose13579 chapter 6 . 4/20/2005
great fic. something i never expected. i wonder if they'll meet up again.
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 6 . 4/20/2005
very vague. but i enjoyed reading it!
| drake220 chapter 6 . 4/19/2005
oh my...wow. i wasn't expecting them to actually have sex.
poor inuyasha- clueless about what the hell to do. well, it seems kagome enjoyed herself. by the way, your description of mirkou was very humourous. great chapter! update soon!
| daniel-gudman chapter 2 . 4/19/2005
"This was one of the problems of countries that didn’t have Japan’s system of doing business, but other cultures had different ways of doing things. Sesshoumaru knew this because this was his job - defending his fellow natives to the intolerance of other countries that had little and pointing fingers wasn’t going to solve anything other than fostering bad feelings and losing business, but he didn’t expect much from a group of people who were used to instant gratification on a general basis."
Is Sesshoumaru's racism/bigotry going to be a theme of the story? Is Jalco actually in breach of contract?
Not that asking's ever stopped you before, but can you please ease up on the Japanese? Sometimes, I have a hard time figuring out what the heck is going on.
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 5 . 4/5/2005
| BleedingRose13579 chapter 5 . 4/5/2005
i'm confused. is this the last chapter or not? if it ain't then please update. i'm sorry for my bad attention span
| drake220 chapter 5 . 4/4/2005
an update! so exciting! i have a final in less then an hour adn am i studying? no! b/c i foolishly checked my email and once i saw your story waiting for me, i HAD to read it. alas! there goes my grades. to a great cause though b/c, as usual, this chapter was lovely and an absolute pleasure to read. i loved kikyo/sesshomaur's interaction. it fit them perfectly. the way that not much was said but much was infered? just nailed their characters with so few words. great job. BTB, your summary that shows in the email (the blurb i guess) is ruined by characters instead of letters. you might want to fix that.)