|Reviews for The Bouncer: An Adaptation|
| Amanda-The Bouncer fan chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
wow! the people from squaresoft should have made the game more detailed like this! its awesome
| Kunnaki chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
I really liked your story. I hope your version is better than the original. Continue to make more, please.
| Kincaid Kjeedo chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
This is not bad for a first fanfic. I like your detail in all the characters actions. Since I own the game, I've seen it many times before, and I know you have captured everything pretty well. I really cannot find fault on your writing, although Leann's line isn't "Crap!" but "Dammit!" However, I will excuse that little line (I've played the game so much, I can quote much of it, so it irritates me when it isn't put correctly, but I digress.)
You are doing a good job. Hope you continue.
| John Whitby chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Coolio! I'm loving the story. I can never remember half the stuff that happened in the game. Now, update or I shall bash you over AIM!
| WeIsLost chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
Very good. It's just like the game. Update soon.
| Ayra Bazahrd chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
I love it, I didn't bother to sign in.
Well, update soon.