|Reviews for After Thoughts|
| Anewreview chapter 15 . 2/3
Sooo… … You SURE you haven't stopped writing this? Because that's what you claim, but somehow I have doubts… … …
Though, if you have ANY motivation at all to continue this fic, do please know that it would be VERY much appreciated. An update would absolutely make my day.
| yoshi396 chapter 15 . 11/12/2014
I really want to see this story finished, I'm very interested in it.
| BlackLatios562 chapter 15 . 4/21/2013
So I has a question...will Megidrimon be making an appearance...
Anyway good story please continue...
May darkness be your greatest ally.
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| Peter Kim chapter 15 . 4/20/2012
So Takato will find about Ryu and Milleniumon and their history together and the connection that both of them has with the Cosen Children and with Takato since Milleniumon created a clone of Takato and Guilmon.
| Peter Kim chapter 15 . 11/5/2011
When are going to write and post the next chapter of Viral State anyway?
| Isangtao chapter 15 . 7/6/2011
I give this story a rating of...
Great, if only because you have quite a few spelling mistakes and often interchange the meaning of to and too.
But other than that, this story is very very high on my list of outstanding Digimon stories.
The characters were realistic, the OC's good, and the villain mysterious.
I hope you do not stop writing this, I enjoyed reading it immensely and I want to read more.
| TheOtherGuy4544 chapter 15 . 5/20/2011
Ok, so now that I've happily read through all fifteen chapters I feel the need to some how convey just how much I enjoyed this. Unfortunately I only have ten thousand characters to do it in, so I'll take the lazy option and go with a couple of words. Awesome and Epic will have to do. I'd say more but I am a reviewer so also have to point out flaws that were present through out, which come in the pesky form of grammar and spelling. Not overwhelming, but they were kind of noticable so maybe some rereading before updating. Other than that I'd ask one favour, when swapping from one scene or pespective to another can we have some kind of sign? I was a little confused as to how Terriermon knew about Milleniumon so if there was some way of splitting moments up I would appreciate it.
But I should talk about the actual chapter shouldn't I? I get carried away sometimes, my bad. So what I wish to say actually atarts last chapter, which is Guilmon's battle legendary. I loved the way that he was trying to befriend the small dragon that's going to kill everyone. Then when we moved onto the next chapter I went from rolling on the floor to having my eyes glued to the screen, so feel I need to say that you do some of the most vivid battles I've ever read. Just wow man, wow. If you keep this up I will be so spoiled I won't be able to stand the way other people write them. So I'm not sure whether I want more or less fights... I'll try to get back to you on that.
And to think that I stumbled onto this, I can happily say that Karma obviously likes me. Unless she is about to hit me with a steamroller...
| Peter Kim chapter 15 . 4/20/2011
It has been a long time since I read this fic. So Yamaki is rebuilding Hypno and I wonder what the new name will be and it should be naming that related with H P Lovecraft himself? I have to go back and reread this fic again since I forgot the main plot of this fic,see you later.
| Yami Vizzini chapter 15 . 4/16/2011
Aiy! That Metal Impulse has to be the most vividly-described attack I've seen in a Digimon fic, if not any story!
Not much else to say, unfortunately, except welcome back.
| Kuroy chapter 15 . 4/8/2011
Omg an update, now you have brightend my day :)
Who said hoping is a waste of time?
Now, if AnT updates his Digimon Tribue I might become religious hehe
The fightscene between Gallantmon and DoruGoramon is pretty cool.
Looking forward to another update for the next two years! (hopefull sooner)
| Crazyeight chapter 15 . 4/7/2011
Seeing this story get updated really made my day today. Nice to see that it, and you, are still alive and well. :P
I had to do some backtracking to familiarize myself with events again, as I found myself rather confused at first when the chapter opened, but once I was back on track events seemed normal. There are some goofs in your grammar and spelling. Some of the more glaring examples are listed below:
Takato’s line: "What's wrong. Question not interesting enough."
-Needs some question marks.
Yamaki’s line: Looks like I was right about were you were heading."
‘Were’ should be ‘where’.
Yamaki’s Line: It expanded yesterday and dropped Rookie right near Takato.
Should there be ‘a’ before Rookie? Just a bit confused as it would help the sentence flow better.
There was also a large number of times where you misspelled Ayaka’s name as ‘Ayeka’. Not sure what that’s about. Oh, and there was at least one instance towards the end where ‘Goggles’ was written as ‘Googles’. Unless you meant it that way. :P
Other than that, a pretty good chappie. ‘Till next time. :)
| rgm0005 chapter 15 . 4/7/2011
Good chapter; I'm glad to see this updated.
However, I noticed that you used periods instead of question marks a number of times.
| RockBane chapter 15 . 4/7/2011
I wonder what Takato and Guilmon will do with this information concerning Cyberdramon...
| Katsugi chapter 15 . 4/7/2011
Thank you for the update. I throughly enjoyed this chapter and was reminded why I put you on my author's alert list. Thanks.
| Kara10 chapter 15 . 4/7/2011
OH MY GOSH! YOU UPDATED! I haven't seen you on this site in years! You just made my day. I don't find stories like yours very often, so it make me happy your back! (Every once in a while, I would check if you had updated... I thought you died. :( ) Anyway, I don't have any comments or criticisms at the moment, because, I honestly don't remember the story (it's been so long), so I have to read it again. HOWEVER, as soo as I'm done rereading it, I'll get on that. And RUKATO FOREVER! :D Nice to have you back. BYES