Reviews for Time Stands Still
Malicia Gil'Sayan chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Very Beautiful, thanks you...
ARiceFan17 chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I think that that is an accurate description of what Ada was thinking and how she felt. It was very well written. kudos on writing well. lol. I hope you write more.
MoutItoniMghtI chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
AAWW! I cried. I think it was good, you made it seem the way Aida would say it!
xLyss chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Great one-shot!

You're very talented (:

I love how you described the scene and made it lengthier and more meaningful with Ada's hidden thoughts, compared to just watching the scene on the big screen.

Keep up the excellant writing!

A very beautiful story!
Martha chapter 1 . 11/18/2006
I like how you describe Ada's feelings as Inman's dying and how you show her unselfishness and willingness to bear his pain for him. Very good. You really portray how she loves him.
sara Kristina chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
that was so good! so sad you almost made me cry! i really loved it! the same sadness there is in the movie...
obscurity chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
That was SO good. You captured it beautifully.
morg chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
this was great. i could imagine this as just what she was thinking. you write very well.
Red Cloud Phoenix chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
It was beautiful. It was so sad, though! It is beautiful still! What do you mean, it's not that good! It's good, believe me.
Angelgirl0910 chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
I love it. Give yourself some credit.
Mr. Pooch chapter 1 . 2/19/2005
You said at the end of your story that you thought it was bad! Well, I beg to differ! You got all of the sadness of that scene in your story. It's really good.