Reviews for Love That Transcends Time
Lyakan chapter 9 . 3/14/2011
Oh pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon! OH MY RA I was laughing so hard at the part where they were talking over the radio! You have GOT to make the Bakura's argue more often like that! XDD Anyways, please update soon! I REALLY want to know what happens next!
Ealdwic chapter 9 . 12/29/2010
Hi there! :3 Just wanted to drop you a review, because there needs to be more Casteshipping and Darkshipping fiction out there, and the fact that you persevered over the years to write this chaptered 'fic is 10 times better than anything I could ask for! I love reading people's writing as it evolves over a few years; it's so interesting to see their vocabulary expand and get more creative, their imagery and detail changing and becoming more vivid. I love seeing the changes and the self-corrections. :D So inspiring and enjoyable to see! You should feel super proud of how much you've advanced and grown. It really comes through in your stories.

I figured I'd point out some minor errors. Nothing in particular, but sometimes you mess up similar words with others, example being 'there' and 'their'. I think that was in this chapter or the one back... Either way, it's not a huge deal. My brain auto-corrects as it reads because I'm odd like that. XD I love beta-ing in my head, I suppose.

Also, you misspelt some words that are made into plural form from singular. I guess you could technically type "yami's" since it's not a real word in English.. But since you mean two of them, "yamis" would be correct! Not a biggie though. I'm just trying to help.

Besides that, I REALLY like this story. It's evolved and become very very interesting to read since chapter one. I'm loving where you've taken the story so far. n n Hopefully you're still writing this one! I look forward to more. Good luck and thanks for the good read! 8D
xXxRaYnExXx chapter 9 . 10/30/2010
you have to update i've read humor fic's of yu-gi-oh and have not laught so much before my mother thinks i have lost it but i realy like this fic
Latemur chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
That was so nicely written, you really did a great job by writing it in Bakura's twisted point of view, it really sounds like him! Well, I'm on to the next chapter
Mytho Del Rosa chapter 9 . 6/2/2010
8U I demand update!

I am seriously loving Atem right now...he's such an asshole, he makes me lol so hard XD. I need to draw him now...he shall be called "Pharaoh Sexbomb"...yes...that is what I shall do 8D
Tears Parallel chapter 9 . 5/7/2010
Bakura left his future self... with Atem? (Is he crazy or what?)

I found it cool that Bakura was able to manipulate the shadows to corner his past self. :D I expected Yami to do the same when past-Bakura cornered him... and laughed when he fell on his behind. It makes me wonder how he was royalty in the past, but then I look towards Atem and think that I'm glad he isn't like Atem at all.

Contradicting thoughts, much? XD

I hope that you'll pick this story up again. It's already been a year, and I want more of this story. XD
Minirowan chapter 9 . 4/21/2010
I am amazed with this. At first I was thrown off by Yami's uncharacteristic cursing and not so dignified thoughts. I never imagined the guy would think like that. I mean, he's usually composed and all. Then again, it's been a LONG while since I've watched the series. Anyway, Atem is really annoying me. It's possible to not be a jerk and be born royalty at the same time. I suppose it didn't apply to him...In the memory world Atem wasn't such a jerk. Are you taking liberties with his personality?

Anyway, good story. I hope you find the time to update soon.
YamiKitsune14 chapter 9 . 4/15/2010
Hey! I just wanted to say that I love this story and that I hope the next chapter is up soon!
ChaosTurtle chapter 9 . 4/2/2010
Please continue it! It's great *_*

i rlly love the way u write xD
Kharnla chapter 9 . 10/26/2009
Awesomeness! Hahahaha. loved the couch part that happened to all. lol. please update soon! what happened to months not years? motivation! awesome story by the way, FUNNY! D
Radioactive Ferret chapter 9 . 10/17/2009
You... You upated? YAY! There aren't too many good YGO fanfic writers on ff.n anymore, so it was rather refreshing to read your story. Most 'humor' fics consist of 'OMG im so funny cuz i randumly screamed 'purple monkeys' It's nice to read something funny that doesn't give my brain cavities. And thank you for not rushing the relationships part. I was worried that you might do that, but you seem to be taking it at a good pace. Great job!
Roxy chapter 9 . 9/7/2009
I LOVE this story. Really. It's well written and VERY funny. I can't wait to see how it turns out. So...good job.
Cana-Puff chapter 9 . 8/22/2009
You MUST update soon, because I can NOT wait for the appearance of the hikaris plus marik. Ok? If the next chapter isn't up I'll use my only method of making you; flooding your inbox with PMs about it! Ok? I like this chapter, but DAMN how the hell do they get together? Yeah, I wanna see that, yet another reason to UPDATE.

kk?
Ceilo chapter 9 . 8/17/2009
This is a good story! It's really interesting seeing how their past selves interact with their future selves, you write them very well! Yami over Atem forever...please update soon!
nanami chapter 9 . 8/8/2009
Yay an update! XD It's a great chapter! Please update soon! D
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