Reviews for Hook
million chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
its good, the only thing that doesn't add up is him having the hook. I mean he could have easily gotten one, but it is really distinguished in the movie when he takes it after berry threatens max
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
Interesting. Catch ya on the flip side.
RabidRaye chapter 1 . 11/10/2005
"but then she was gone, like a comet crossing the night sky"

the similes you used add a lot of imagery to the storyline. It's a little gruesome "and wiped the remaining blood from the hook that he had stabbed inside of David" but then again, so is the original movie.

I dont understand why David wouldn't try to run or fight Ben.

But it's a good concept of a scene for the movie, or a sequal to the movie. Maybe more of a struggle between the two would add interest.
Alexis Rose chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Did he use a hook? I thought he heard it from Barry, Helen, Julie, and Ray when they were telling that ghost story and he heard them talking about it. And then he later used a hook.

But, either way, pretty good story you have here. _