|Reviews for Lost|
| Rane2920072 chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
Oh, poor dear! Good start if you are going to continue it :) Have a great weekend and I enjoyed reading this ;)!
| Alice Dodgson chapter 1 . 2/11/2005
This is really bittersweet...I love Hermione/Sirirus stories! Especially ones where they fall in love after he's already escaped from Azkaban - I *hate* the Time Turner stories where she goes back to the Marauders era and falls in love with teenage Sirius, because I think he would have been much too immature for her then. Anyway, I enjoyed your story - you write very eloquent sentences, and the part where he appeared to her in a dream was very moving. The only thing I found lacking was that I wanted more background on their relationship - when and why they fell in love, what their relationship was really like before he died, etc. Details are the meat and potatoes of any good story, and I found this to be a bit too general. Also, the bitch who murdered him is Bellatrix, not Beatrix.
I look forward to reading more of what you've written!