This was such a unique idea, unique in how it was written as well with the four POVs and no dialogue. Kind of intense to read! I really enjoyed it.

Interesting Take On The Lights And Darks

Relationships.

I Never Really Thought About Yami Bakura And Yugi, But You Got Me Instead.

And Atem/Yami And Ryou Bakura I Never Really Gave Much Thought To It, But I Well Definitely Look In To It.

Ryou Cracked Me Up.

You Want What?

Yeah. I'm Sure Him Wanting Yugi Would Be Quite Shocking, But Hey Atem/Yami Wanting Ryou Was Quite Shocking.

Nicely Done, Honey.

I absolutely adored this story! I love the style it's written in and how you've captured their characters.

Sneaky Yugi! Very clever. I like this portrayal of Yugi: not (for lack of a better phrase) a damsel in distress, not so much a passive character, but someone who can make decisions for himself and actually does things that go against what the Pharaoh wants.

This is amazing! I love how you've decided to write this, and I can't wait to read the rest. You've written Bakura really well. Plus that last line was gold.

This is pretty good. I'm a bit impartial to the style, but it's okay. This reminds me of the song '88 lines about 44 women,' you should check it out.

You wrote this so well, and the format conveys this better than the typical.

O.M.G. I was biting my lips to keep myself from squealing because my sister asleep.

I love the way you wrote this, a bit confusing it took a bit of time for me to get use to it, but when i did, it was just WOW. I can really imagine each one of them talking, and you nailed their characters just right.

I love kleptoshipping! I love other pairings too but Yami Bakura x Yugi is just so hot lol. Good work on this pairing! As for Yami Yugi x Ryou, you really made me appreciate this pairing! And gave a depth to Ryou's character.

Its a beautiful fic, though i would have liked to see what Yami Yugi thought of what Yami Bakura and Yugi were doing, after all Yami bakura shared his opinions about Yami yugi and ryou's activities

XD

Wow. This was good O.o I loved how each of them had a side of the story and it was all connected. Good job -

Well, just another person to add to the list of those who think this story is incredible. I can't possibly list all of the ways I think so but I know this will stick with me for a very long time. I love how you can work within the constraints of canon and make anything happen while remaining relentlessly true to their original characters. Wow, a switch-up I couldn't possibly picture executed so artfully. Thanks for sharing!

Woah! So Yuggiand the Thief King! Then Yami and Ryou?Nice! That was wonderful!

I'm not sure if I ever reviewed this, so I'm doing that now.

I really like how you wrote each chapter in a character's POV. I haven't found too many fics that can do this so well, and I really enjoyed it! And the pairings were nice too, though, I really wish I could find a Ryou/Yuugi fic in your collection.

Keep writing please! *puppy eyes*

I take it Yugi's POV goes over a bit from 's POV doesn't it? That bit about taking his heart is so obvious to see from Bakura's point and Yugi's spot on the mark about it - absolutely love that 'whose the better thief comment' at the end! And 's right on the mark in terms of who Yugi is, what I mean is their thoughts and comments to each other match with the other, like with Bakura seeing the 'innocence' & there being more to Yugi than meets the eye matches thre little thoughts and the ending for Yugi's POv.

Ryou's POV is a little weird in places & its 'Ryou' you know? Yet in a way I can't help thinking it isn't...I don't know there's just something 'off' about him.

The four separated viewpoints is a little confusing to follow but informative enough each time to know whats going on and where it fits in relation to the last POV. I imagine you probably did each kisses pair first, wrote them out then structured them as separated alternating pieces?

Yami's POV, for starters he is the only one that actually mentions 'love' directly which for some reason I like, also like his thoughts on his host-they make sense without seeming unfair. The thought on Kaiba and 'volumes instead of issues' is very amusing and odd way of putting it.

Again Yami's POV fits with Ryou's only it seems to take him alot longer to get to where Ryou is at any one moment. I'm a little peeved that you didn't show Ryou telling or Bakura asking for what he ewanted - course he wouldn't have said Yuugi's heart outright or whatever but you seemed to suggest he said something to Ryou and then didn't finish it on Yami's end.I do, partially, like Yami's last sentences about the thief owning something that is currently forbidden to Yami..that was a good way of putting it.

Its all really pretty good, in charater and well detailed though at times it was a little hard to read and follow. But yeah...me like:)

Wait, what's this? Some one actually wrote pairings including Yugi and Bakura and did NOT give everyone seperate bodies?

You get points in my book just for that.

I LOVE how you worked with the fact that Yugi and the pharoh and Barkura and the Spirit of the Ring were in the same body.

The characterization is also some of the best I've ever read in not just YGO fandom, but perhaps any at all. (I say this an avid fanfic reader of almost ten years now.)

I'm so pleased to see this story completed as I've kept re-reading it as you've been writing it.

Oh. My. God. You write so beautifully it should be illegal. Not if I tried for a lifetime and was sealed in a Millenium item to try for several thousand more years could I ever accomplish what you have.

These are amazing. They pulled me in and made me feel what the characters were doing. Strange how the innocence of kisses can be more erotic than the most graphic of lemons...

Oh! There's so many teasers towards another story-! I wish this was continued onto the second meetings of them... *sigh* Ah well. I worship the ground a masterful writer like yourself walks on.