Reviews for Done With You
uhhh.ya dont need 2 know chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
LOVE IT! that is so Paul. Poor Suze, and damn! ur good at rhyming!
n.a.y.a.z chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
OUCH!... that had to hurt.
PisceanGirlPower chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
whoo...NICE. After i read it, i was like 'hey, this has a sing-songy ring to it!' so i read it over again, this time SINGING it as i read. & lemme tell u, it would sound SUPERB as a rap song (i hope u dont hate rap or anything : ... in case u do, sorry!)

scarredvines chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
'Nother great story/poem. ~Silver
Merry chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
You are totally right. Meg Cabot even says it in her chatroom book club thingy for twilight. She said he reminded her of a jerk she knew (possibly dated) and she basically had nothing good to say about him, saying that a guy like Paul only liked "the chase" of it...although in the series there are subtly hints of Paul being a sort of decent person.
Doree chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Ouch...that was...janky and messed up of Paul to say.

It makes me sad that he could think that way...

(Hey! I just rhymed! Sweet...)

It was good, but I hate think that Sexy Paul would say something like that...hmph.

Susie Madison chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Hey Lolly,

I have had the same fear that Paul would do that. But in my mind I quickly shut out that thought becaus eI love Paul and don't want to think about all the bad things that he could do. I know that I am probably in denial but come on. I liked this but again I really don't want to think of Paul like this-lol but this was done in a very good way and I love it.

luve Susie
Caralynne chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Aw...that was...totally Paul.
In Love with Fantasy - Jesse chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
That... was great! I loved it. But if Jesse DOES give up hope on Suze, I hope he picks me! Hehe. Anyway, it's awesome, like you lolly.
sweetsour chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
that was very well written. and ive always wondered...wat would paul do if he won over suze? ur poem reflected a likely possibility. good job!
Summer chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
hmm...I really can't say that I agree. I don't think Meg Cabot really intended Paul to be that character.
gazebows chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Boo-hoo. Paulie, you suck.

And Lolly, you suck too.

For making him look like such an asshole.

But it was still a hella talented piece of work.
Nice Hayley chapter 1 . 2/20/2005

Truth is, none of us really know what's going through Paulie's head. You could be totally right.

But in Twilight, he just, like, gave up. He didn't even win. And that's not the Paulie I know.

But this Paulie right here WON. But now tat he's won, he doesn't have anything to do. See, that's why its really hard to do anything PS in fanfiction. Because once everything's said and done, the author's left going "Now what?"

As, probably, would Paulie do.

In fact, most fanfiction ending PS has Paul smirking victoriously to himself, saying how he's won. But it all just ENDS there. They never go on to, like, a week later just to check up on the couple. It's just, "HAHA I won, Jesse lost, Suze is mine MUAHAHAHA. Now I can go and continue being my hot shifter self and make out with Suze whenever I want. Teehee."

I must admit, that would be a little anti-climactic. Unless Jesse fought back and became evil and manipulative. But that's just not Jesse...right?

This was gREAT girlie! Keep it up!

Love ya lotses,

ir4u2nv chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
Wow that was different but still cool. Well I see Paul as several different people and I think you got him down in one of his side. As a player and someone who just doesn't know the meaning of NO
Lalala chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Nice poem with the rhyming and all of that but its kinda sad. Poor Suze. heh.
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