The story was great, but despite being a firm H/G shipper, I'd rather Harry and Ginny don't get back together. Harry was an absolute jerk and no amount of grovelling can change that.
I think you captured the chracters' emotions perfectly! Kudos

Firstly, I would say that the story at beginning and middle are decent. Although I hate it, because I love H/H. The ending was rushed. You just sort of made a huge contrast with Ginny. One point never forgiving him. Then after Harry said a few things, ‘poof’ Ginny is beginning to forgive him. I’m a little disappointed at the end

Hmm. Pretty short compared to how long and good you could make it. Maybe an ending where they get back together?

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What? NOOOO! Awwwww, that was so emotional but I can't believe it just ended like that! It doesn't seem to be completed, like in music the piece just ends in the middle without a complete end or a song in the middle of a verse. Still, a beautiful story nonetheless.

NOOOOOO! BUT YAYYY! She should have waited a little while until letting him near Lizzy. Personally, I think Ginny's character after raising the baby alone would have resisted for a little while. Then, he could have shown his determination and maybe there could have been like a cute moment where he shows up to surprise them and finds their daughter and makes a connection with her. I think she would have let Harry near her after seeing that...

LOL! I'm rambling now! Great chapter, although short (hint, hint).

Ohhh, really liked this beginning! Kind of subtle at first, but then you begin to understand what she's talking about. Great writing, except minor grammar mistakes like, "me and Elizabeth" etc. Can't wait to read on!

Wow! Why doesn't anyone finish a story. I find out that they are written years ago. I keep getting involved in great stories and then they have no end.

Are you even considering finishing? You have a great story line going and you write with such emotion that you draw the reader in.

I really like it.

Thank goodness, not another he-left-her-and-comes-back-years-later fic! Great stuff! :D

ok i like your writing but this story is so anoying and frustrating. You didnt build the charcter, you threw them into a story and placed them into situations that they werent ready for. A story, especially one like this, needs to show a certain amount of growth, this didnt. Ginny went from one decision to the next without much hesitation and there was only a generalised idea of her life now and the people involved. With harry there was again only a generalised version of his life at present, there didnt seem to be any depth. Why would harry suddenly start caring about his daughter in a split second when for a long time he really couldnt give a shit? if you expanded on your work you would have a fantastic story,at the moment your just skimming the surface.

ok...every child does need a father but i think ginny could have put up a bit more of a fight, she sounded too accpeting to trustworthy.

that last part gave me goosebumps

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue! This is SUCH a great story, and I would love to see what happens.

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no no no. not the end. keep going.

It's very cute. I think for an ending you should have Lizzy grow up living with seperate parents (like joint custidy) and then have her walk out on one of them.