Reviews for The Virginity Challenge
LadyWhiteRose2015 chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
good story. it was cute, short, and clean
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
umm, really good writing! A little weird for my tastes but beside that really good!
Dagger-Seishin chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
sry harry as a mom... kinda creepy lol
Alexa1993 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Miss Lily Rose Snape chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Bahahhahahahahahahahahaha I loved it :) I'm lol-ing right now XD
amortentiaaa chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
Toast and Stitch chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
OUI VA! I love the way your mind works. Who would've guessed?
Sophia chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
LOL! It was very amusing, thank you.
goldenbubbles chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
I thought it was a really good idea but i didn't like the story much, Sorry. It was too fast and not much happened. It would have been better if it was longer. Good idea though.
Zara Riddle chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
I started luaghing when i found out Harry was pregant to funny.
Artemis chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
I liked the Idea behind the story but I think it was resolved too quickly... I think that Hermione's acceptance of her crush on Severus and Severus' acceptance of her proposition would have been more in character had it been drawn out a little more with a little bit of angst... I can say from the perspective of a teacher that if a Teacher develops feelings for one of their students (of age or not) a little more introspection and angsting occurs... That is not to say that this has to become an all out hormonal angst-fest but I think Hermione would have been a little less accepting of her feelings for Snape...

I also think the pregnancy aspect of the harry/ron plotline would have been more in character had there been a little more concern about the pregnancy (no teenage mother/ father just accepts the fact that they are pregnant and goes around telling everyone, especially snarky potions masters whom they still despise)

It has A LOT of potential...

as it stands it is too short, not very well explained, and extremely out of character.

sin3000 chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
nicely ! I hope to see more of your work on this story.
Currently deciding chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
oh plz update... plz *pouts with puppy eyes*
Gina Olivia chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
lol. nice.
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