Reviews for Ill Intentions
Guest chapter 19 . 4/30/2012
RavenRulz chapter 19 . 4/22/2011
this is pretty damn good! Nice storyline. Ravens my favorite character and I'm glad you prettymuch kept her in-character for this; in other words, it's awesome dude!
NeighborsofLove chapter 18 . 4/19/2011
i really like your story, it's well done. the titans are all in-characters, both in their individual thoughts as well as their interactions to each other.i haven't seen any grammar mistakes, so kudos :)

when archimage talks to raven about being a demoness, i think omitting the 'i'm half demoness' would have made the 'i'm still human' more effective, and slightly more in character (not that it was OC).

i like archimage; he makes a good bad guy. he's original and powerful, and has a plausible motive. maybe take a little caution because his speech resembles slade's, but overall, very nice. it's been a while since the last update, but i can't wait to continue reading when that happens :)
MichelleAnn chapter 19 . 10/11/2010
Please keep writing this! I'm so eager to find out what happens!
Theif King Akefia Bakura chapter 19 . 5/23/2010
please finish i want to know if raven accually lives
Rosalind du Coudray chapter 19 . 5/12/2010
Please continue with this story! I love it so much!
Kitsuma chapter 19 . 8/7/2009
So epic! sorry I didn't review on the previous ones the stories that are not new I usually wait till i get to the last chapter and so far your story is epic I like how you center it around raven but where you still keep some attention on the other characters it makes a nice touch
Clyresta chapter 19 . 7/31/2008
AH! I KNEW i shoudn't have read a story that wasn't complete, but it sounded really good, even though the ch. r short, & now I've finished the 19th ch., & find that there isn't a 20th ch! AH! Please update!
Lisa chapter 19 . 7/27/2007
well thats definately not pms.
Lisa chapter 2 . 7/27/2007
xXxLostBunnyxXx chapter 19 . 5/4/2007
Please continue this story..i love it. 5 stars and saving it to my favourites! _
Horizon Brave chapter 19 . 1/14/2007
Ah...I'm sad when I read this and see that it hasn't been updated since 11-15-05. Please either update the story or remove it because I hate it when good stories aren't finished.
X chapter 19 . 1/3/2007
Great! plz continue!
Rosie-Rain-11 chapter 19 . 12/26/2006
Brilliant! Please continue!
january sunshine chapter 19 . 12/16/2006
Yay, I'm review 3! I feel special.

But oh, you are positively CRUEL.

So close to finishing, and yet it's not done!

Surely, college hasn't killed you...

In other words: fennesh now. I like it.
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