Reviews for Moon
hA-UkA chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Nice descriptive use.
Clare Mansfield chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Out of all those MANY "and Sirius watches Remus sleeping" this is by far and away the best. Very well done

PhantomsDaughter13 chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
It was pretty mellow, but it was very well written. I can honestly say that was VERY descriptive, but not annoyingly so(that's my problem...) Anywho, great job! Keep it up!


"Quel esta, a'maelamin..."
Goddess of Idun chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
i'd liked to
Faith Selene chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
It's just so sweet..
Cerii-chan chapter 1 . 2/18/2005
That was wonderful... I love the ending. I never could end something.
hardfootrk chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Excuse me for sounding...what's the word, well, not like the insane me, and not like the SLASH hater, but that was beautiful...
Tanja88 chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
sweet, very cute.


NybCR chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
It is very interesting, and has a wonderful cliff hanger at the end... except now I want to know what he does when he comes out from behind his dark curtains!
Firehotchica chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
I think Sirius should admit his feelings and stop hinding in the dark. You should check the harry potter story Days of my Innocence. My friend and I worked on it. Please let us know if we did good.
alliekatgal chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Very sweet and full of longing. Lovely description of Remus in the moonlight, captured. Yum.