Reviews for Mexico
EvilChick13 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
This is wonderful! I don't think it's OOC, it seems perfectly in character to me. Especially how he is still slightly awkward.
funkycool chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
This was really good, I liked your take on it and it's different (in a good way) that it's from Ida's perspective. I like the idea of Max and Vincent going away and developing some sort of understanding...Anyway good story, I hope to read more of your stuff soon :)
Cath chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Most Colatteral fanfic is a huge pile of crap, littered with silly plots and mary sues who all mysteriously hook up with Vincent, this on the other hand was a breath of fresh air! Tactfull and not overly obvious, this is a wonderful piece of writing!
Felaine chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
I like your story; in character for all three of them.

I don't see your story as AU. It's not like Max took Vincent's pulse or something on the MTA.

Hope the guys are having fun in Mexico.

Felaine
jessica tran chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
great story! so this is an AU right? and just to be sure...Vincent isn't dead...Max fled to Mexico with him...told the police that vincent WAS dead..and they left Annie back in the US...?