|Reviews for If You Only Knew|
| platinumfanfiction chapter 1 . 9/10/2017
thank GOD! I was reading this story some years back. took me forever to find it again. yay! I'm so happy
| Wfest chapter 52 . 4/2/2017
Hey, wasn't finished! So, where was I... Original characters and new ones. There are a few inconsistencies in the plot, for example the time elapsed since the first abduction is sometimes about one year, sometimes two. But nothing to bad or confusing to the overall storyline.
I just hope you will at one time manage to post the conclusion. Thanks a lot for your good and entertaining story!
| Wfest chapter 53 . 4/2/2017
Well, I really like your story, though with the first chapter I had expected it to go differently than it actually did. More action and darker. Especially the first chapters were sometimes filled with too much superfluous stuff (sugar binge?), it made reading them exhausting. A little more concise writing would have been better, but you probably know that, because you said yourself that the first chapters suck.
Nevertheless later on you balanced the storyline better (and it's a very good one!). You managed to put in twists that kept it exciting and I very much like your versions of the original characters
| Mitsu Taisho chapter 53 . 2/15/2017
This story keeps me going sometimes. I absolutely love it! When i get a notification that you have updated i immediately start reading. there have been many times where I run out of books and i come right back to this one, I've lost track of how many times i have re-read it. please don't give up on it ! with love- mitsu
| madison chapter 53 . 5/6/2016
You should really continue this is my fave fan fiction
| katiewinchester87 chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
I love this please please finish it
| Dusty-Evals chapter 4 . 12/8/2015
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| Lazensha Rose chapter 53 . 12/1/2015
I think if you changed all of the characters names in this story you could publish it as a book
| evil-inu-babe-44 chapter 53 . 11/11/2015
Have you ever considered pulling a '50 shades' and just changing the names and slight appearances and making this into a book series. I've been following this for 10 years and I'm still hooked. I would totally buy it as a book, and I'm sure a lot of others would too. Considering the demonic captures as comparable to things like the holocaust experiments you could draw in a huge crowd. Believe me; I worked in a library for 4 years. I've seen what kind of books succeed. I just think your story is really great, and you would make a killing. Can't wait for the next update!
| jaimed1968 chapter 4 . 10/23/2015
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| SariaSpeaks chapter 53 . 8/22/2015
This feels like more of a TV show than a novel. There's so many archs and characters, and I genuinely love the flow this whole thing has made for itself. Think I'll go back and read the early stuff for nostalgia's sake ;-)
| cati918773 chapter 53 . 8/5/2015
I really hope that this isnt over. It was really rough getting into it based on the style of writing, but as soon as I was maybe five chapters in I was hooked. So hooked I couldn't bring myself to take the time to write reviews as I went.
Keep up the good work. I really enjoy this story.
| Blackthorn Ashe chapter 53 . 8/3/2015
Yayyyyyy! Another chapter! I actually just finished reading it. :P
| Evervescent chapter 53 . 8/1/2015
Have I ever mentioned how much I love your family and friendship fluff? Platonic relationships are so important, and they're often blurred out in fics. Here, you have such amazing examples of them. Inuyasha and Kagome is my favorite. They were friends at first, and they technically still are. It's really strong, it's not just some washed out full-on romance type thing, they're actually there for each other. Same goes with all the other little platonic pairings, like Sango and Inuyasha,. Sesshomaru and Rin, etc. They're so beautiful, I need to thank you for writing them. So yes, thank you, thank you VERY much!
And somehow, the plot thickens even more! Like damn, I am so excited for this story, this could end up being a few hundred chapters long and I'd literally never stop reading it. I'm glad to see Sesshomaru go his new arm back, but with a twist from canon— it's sans Bakusaiga. I really do love everybody's magical swords and weapons, and I kind of love the fact that the importance and reliance on weaponry isn't so stressed in this story. It gives a chance to see true characters strength, you know?
Not that there's anything wrong with weapons, it's just that fighting with weapons is so common that it's really refreshing to see less of an emphasis on them. I like how you, alternatively, put more emphasis on their auras and whatnot. The concepts are pretty important in a lot of South and Eastern Asian religions and cultures, so it's always really nice to see it represented in different ways on here. But damn, your descriptions and how you word the stuff about auras is like, amazing.
TL;DR This chapter is amazing as always and I'm not gonna stop-rereading it and fangirling over it until the next one comes out.
| Random Chick's Pen chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
She's a freak for liking mythology, being disappointed in the human race, and for enjoying READING? What freak world IS that horrid place?! She'd fit right in at my school where most of the girls my age had spent middle school with a nose in a book, and are armed with SOME measure of mythology. We also like to occasionally get deep philosophical and all agree that humanity sucks ass a LOT of the time. It's pretty disappointing. And the group isn't ENTIRELY made up of girls, either! Good God, you've named a school of some of the worst people known to man, as far as I am concerned. Ugh.