|Reviews for I did it for you, Dad|
| Leslie Anne chapter 1 . 2/24
If you read the story, she did have a name. Leslie Anne. I know that in 'Sons of Thunder' Trent Malloy didn't have a sister. But, in my story, I gave him one. She already had her 3rd degree black belt and was trying for her 2nd degree. She tried it once in Houston, but didn't get it. Trent told her that there was another karate tournament in Forth Worth in a couple of weeks.
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Good story! Well written!
| Jessie13 chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
Great story, but I noticed a mistake. I'm not sure how they might do things in different forms of Martial Arts, but the one I'm taking you can't skip belts. Like where Trent's sister was trying for 2nd degree black belt, she can't just skip the 2nd and 3rd and go straight to 4th. Oh, and it would have been a little easier to read if she had a name, but other than that the story was very well done.
| Kippling Croft chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
That was cute I liked it
| Space-Case7029 chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Good story. Enjoyed it.
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
So cute! Loved it!
| mcatB chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Nice job for a first timer. A couple of grammar glitches... But the main things I saw - canon wise, Trent does not have an older sister. And also, if he did, doesn't she deserve a first name?