Reviews for Ashes to Ashes
akiho13 chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
That was hilarious! XD
Yami-chan and Unrealistic chapter 6 . 6/11/2006
Me want more Kumo/Kaze goodness! *cries*
Salacassera chapter 6 . 3/18/2006
I thought that was a very well-written piece. Things weren't really that OOC - Kaze still had his hatred, and the other villains' reactions seemed accurate to me. I like how you wrote the hopelessness in places.
Lecelamona Lecelanet Marzakey chapter 6 . 2/20/2006
good storie! please write another! i really love kumoxkaze pairings! please!
Lecelamona Lecelanet Marzakey chapter 4 . 2/19/2006
please write more! i must find out if he really dies of a broken heart! please! this is really good! please write more!
Silverblacktears chapter 6 . 1/13/2006
Well I like it.

I'm very glad you decided to go on with it.

Poor Ku.

PL ... uhh ... SBT now ...
darko-blade chapter 6 . 1/9/2006
I loved it! One of the sweetest pieces I've read in a long while...I read the whole thing whilst having "My December", by Linkin Park, on repeat...it suited it beyond explanation.

Well done. _ You wrote Shiroi Kumo beautifully...
PLEASE DELETE INACTIVE chapter 6 . 1/3/2006
This story was so good! I enjoyed it very much! i guess you can say it was a sweet story! So kawaii! You write very well, so keep up the good work! 0
Feral Phoenix chapter 6 . 1/3/2006
Don't hate yourself! You finally updated! We love you for that fact alone!

Kaze is... an idiot. I bet Fabula just wants to beat his head in right now. I know I do. Grr. Stupid boy.

But then, what plot would there be if they reached home plate now?

It's not as bad as you think, cheer up! Be happy! We're so glad you're continuing! *huggle*
Captain Moochan chapter 6 . 12/29/2005
T_T I hate you too! Poor Makenshi! *sobs*...*shakes fist* Ebil! But a good story nonetheless!...BUT MAKENSHI! Wah!
Lahz chapter 6 . 12/29/2005
Eh, "THE end"? There's not going to be more? ( I don't think you're a bad writer... -hug-
Mr. Sado-Masochism chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
Ooh, I like it!
Miotis Kain chapter 5 . 10/9/2005
Interesting storyline. Pretty much in character. I thought I spotted some grammar and spelling errors, but that's probably a result of the upload... Or I'm just being a crackhead and seeing things. Probably the latter. Either or, it didn't take anything away from the story.

I like how you wrote it to fill in the unseen spots of the anime. Doing it that way, it kind of explains why Kaze had problems getting the Magun to move against Makenshi and why Makenshi never killed Kaze despite his resulting advantage. (At least, that's how I saw it. Feel free to slap me and call me stupid.)

I enjoyed reading this. I hope you'll continue it, but I won't blame you if you don't. I know how hard it can be to come up with the inspiration to write. I am, afterall, a lazy bum that barely ever finishes what she starts.
Lady-Willowish chapter 5 . 10/7/2005
END! Why end? Don't end! I really like this fic, you should continue it! It's very good. PLease write more! *begs on knees*
Feral Phoenix chapter 5 . 10/7/2005
Aw... hidoi yo... poor little Kumo-chan...

Wait... end of CHAPTER, or end of FANFIC? That would be a horrible place to leave it off! XP Plz tell me there's more! I can't really yell at you for what happened to Kumo-chan, because I've been worse to him in my own stuff, but I *can* yell at you if this really is -the end-...

Not only that, but Fabula would probably MURDERIZE you...

Plz? This has been going so well... *sniffle*
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