|Reviews for Kept Behind|
| Major Fan chapter 2 . 7/23
The interactions between Dumbledore, Sir Nicholas and Remus were touching, exactly as it would have been should Rowling have been so gruesome with the pen as to kill our poor boy. Thank you for putting thought into this. Good fanfiction always brings a smile, like good news gives health to the bones.
| Bathilda Bagshot chapter 1 . 7/23
How intruiging! Looking forward more!
| Ether Morlon chapter 8 . 4/17
Lol, "like some black wraith" I just imagined a human dementor, along with how people always describe Snape to glide, God the image...hahahaha
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
I love it! This is super cool.
| AutumnLeaves03 chapter 8 . 1/8
THIS IS SO COOL! And such a great idea!
| Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 10/7/2015
Umm.. Technically, two opposite sides of a magnet would attract each other, not repel. Now if they were BOTH Dark Lords, then we can revisit this magnet metaphor. xD
Nice take on Petunia. The regret and reluctance. It's the same feeling she gave me on DH.
Lots of tears and snot on my end in this chapter. Poor Sirius and Harry.. and Severus..? Although, I'm not sure if our dear Potions Master misery should count. XD
Cliff hanger! ..Severus..! .Faint! I'm pretty sure there were far more impossible things you've stood witness to than a ghost. Even if said ghost is one Harry James Potter. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Well.. This just goes to show that Wizards CAN die from a car crash.. My while life was a lie. xD
Granted one should really not trust Hagrid's judgement. Wizards are just as squishy and bony as the next Muggle, so really, blunt force trauma works just as well as an AK at point blank. xD
| Ford.Ye.Fiji chapter 8 . 7/22/2015
This. Was. AMAZING! It's everything I've been looking for for ages! I'm off to read the sequel, expect another review soon!
| Nikki Pond chapter 8 . 6/13/2015
good ending! drama
| DesperateReader chapter 8 . 5/30/2015
This story is amazing..
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/21/2015
This was so great! I really liked how to wrote their relationship! Really believable! Great job :)
| whitehound chapter 4 . 3/5/2015
Of course, the idea that Snape is prejudiced against Gryffindor derives from fanfiction, not from the books. In the books, he has a thing about the Trio and to a lesser extent about Neville (he nags Neville a lot but we only see him give the boy one detention and take three-and-a-third points off him in six years), not about Gryffindors in general. He does make one disparaging remark about Gryffindor - but that wasa when he was eleven.
| whitehound chapter 3 . 3/5/2015
How prescient of you - you very nearly came up with the Horcruxes before HBP came out.
| whitehound chapter 2 . 3/5/2015
It sems a little OTT for Vernon I think - he'd be more likely to pay for a funeral but choose the cheapest service, especially as the Dursleys don't seem to be very well off. I suppose the ghosts can't see Harry because he's not properly dead, and therefore not properly a ghost, but Snape the Legilimens has extra ways of seeing.
| whitehound chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Very interesting, nice original start.
You have a tiny Britpick here, and a rather larger medical pick - although one which is common in medical dramas on TV.
The Britpick is that we call it "Accident and Emrgency", not "the Emergency Rooom", and they would say they were "taking him to A&E", not "... to the ER."
The medical one is that if a patient flatlined the hospital staff would be using heart massage and adrenaline etc. Defibrillator paddles aren't used to treat flatlining but for ventricular fibrillation. That means that the heart muscle is still in motion but it's lost its rhythm and is writhing and jumping about in a random way which doesn't pump blood effectively. The shock from the paddle momentarily stops the heart altogether, to give the normal rhythm a chance to be re-established - pretty much like re-booting a computer. So you would see them shock Harry several times, but if his heart rhythm kept going off again within a second or two they would eventually give up.