|Reviews for Do You Love|
| Sage chapter 1 . 2/22
It's a nice story LONG
| Takua Nui chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Wow, great story! Quite lengthy as well. Not too sappy or mushy, with realistic character actions. I also like how this story really doesn't clash with the story from the show.
| Solaris10 chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I like how you set your story up. Different from most people. To use a saying, "Off the beaten track" I also liked its length and I appriciate how long it must have taken to write this.
| RavenFortuna chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Very good story you got there.
But i think you should have put this in chapters, so more people could have seen this and reviewed.
(I Hope my English is legible.)
| Kitsune6 chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
I just God only know how long reading this and that's it? Holding hands?
It is good writing.
| janedoe091170 chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
...wow. It was long and took a while to read, yet it held my attention throughout. Your writing style flows smoothly, and the execution of the story was more or less perfect. Great job!
| ravenslair chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
What can I say except I loved the story. The way you brought them together was unique. Please, keep on writing Rob/Rae stories. Thanks...Gerry
| faLLen-dreamz chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
wow. I did not find this story till today [over 8 months since you posted it]. It was long, yes. A bit tedious to read, yes. But I must say I truly enjoyed it, especially the style of writing you used and the little 'arguments/debates' robin and raven had. Out of all the rob/rae fanfics i have read [and believe me i have read A LOT] this is one of my more favorite ones. Keep writing!
| bamberbabe88 chapter 1 . 9/2/2005
i really love reading your stories they are always so interesting. even though you only seem to write robin and raven fics (which i love by the way) they are always different yes they end up together but the way they get there is always different and quite interesting. normally your grammer is pretty good but this really needed the once over. i cannot wait to read your next fic. _
| Phantom Dragon of Eternal Chaos chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
Damn man you really know how to write a story. Sorry its been months and i havnt reviewd. just got my membership so to speak. but im reviewing now. you should write a sequel to this. it would be amazing im sure.
| Kick-Me-When-Im-Down chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Aw, I loved it, there were bumps but they got together in the end, another great one-shot for you!
| funvince chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Well, this fic both delighted me and irritated me severely at the same time. So, uh, good job? I liked the conversations between Robin and Raven and how you didn't make it easy for him to get closer to her. The conversations between Raven and Beast Boy and Raven and Cyborg were mature and worked well.
There were only 2 things that I really didn't like. First was Robin being such a coward. If he really doesn't like Starfire romantically then he should say something. Friends don't string each other along. I know that I was supposed to find Star's persistence annoying and sympathize with Robin, but I found him to be a jerk. He keeps complaining that she doesn't understand when he doesn't even bother to tell her that he doesn't want to be her Valentine or whatever.
I do give you much credit though for showing that Starfire can argue logically and that she isn't an idiot. So many authors seem to forget that. The second complaint is the implication that just because Starfire had some negative emotions like everyone else she's suddenly a two-faced manipulator who's been fooling everyone for years.
The issue of trust was handled nicely though I was surprised at the depth of Raven's anger at Robin over Terra. I guess that shows how much faith Raven had placed in Robin's leadership. And the ending was quite sweet with the two holding hands. So, overall, 7/10. Keep up the good work.
| Robin Wingster chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Very original, and you also let the characters with their personalities as they are...
| JPElles chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Keep on writing, I'll keep on reading. Great piece.
| BlackShield chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Overall it was very good. (Ignoring those spelling/grammar errors that fairy will, presumably, kill horribly.) 47 pages of loverly goodness. However, since most of the others commenting already expressed its goodness to you, I feel that it's more necessary for me to say what I disliked rather than repeat what I liked.
Just know that I really liked it.
These are the things I didn't like:
One thing I didn't like-and this is just a pet peeve of mine, pay it little mind, as many like it-is where Raven kept thinking about how compatible they were and how she didn't like Robin but she did but she shouldn't and that. It just... irks me. I've seen BB/R writers use it once too often, and I try to avoid it myself. It strikes me as... maybe not out of character, but it doesn't seem like she'd be holed up thinking about it constantly. Of course I've never been in 'love' or whatever, so that very well may be how it is, but it just... ugh. It bugs me.
The other thing would have to be how Starfire was handled. I understand that this is set after Robin already started getting tired of her, it just seems like you could have mentioned that somehow, or made it more... eh. It seemed unrealistic. Thus far in the series Robin hasn't shown much sign of exasperation or extreme irritation at Starfire, so it seemed out of place that he was suddenly so annoyed with her. I know it was meant to be picked up somewhere in the middle of him getting sick of her, but it still seemed abrupt. I also rather disliked a few other things about how she was handled, but those needed to exist for the plotline.
Now, since I'm bored and I have time, the things I did like:
I liked the imagery of the Tower in the beginning-how you described its state of disrepair. I also liked how you addressed the problem of cleaning up after a battle. Those drones obviously didn't just pick themselves up.
So, I applaud the idea of logic, and the way you used it as a plot.
However, all these 'likes' are just recurring "Good job"s and pats on the back, so...
Meh. Good job.