|Reviews for A Fine Line|
| JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
Poor Donna she is going a little bonkers... I wonder if Josh talks to Donna in his head... Great story...
| ReverendKilljoy chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
A very nice piece, which surprised me in its balance and maturity. I thought the line about "Donna, not 'and Donna'" was brilliant.
I'm curious though if you could extend this piece, which is essentially character study, to include action or character development. Do you have any longer pieces in the works? One hops so, as based on this, I cannot wait to see.