Reviews for Sacrifice Theory
CAPTAINPRICE79 chapter 3 . 8/23
I assume that the names of the chapters has something to do with the Yautja(Predator) language...numbers, maybe?
AC01 chapter 18 . 2/22
I'm still reeling a bit from everything that happended in the alternate ending/original ending (chapter 17), so, naturally, this ending is just one huge cliffhanger. I can't say if I'll prefer how this scene will be wrapped up this time (in the sequel/third installment), given how wonderfully achieved that already in the chapter previous, but I trust that it will be fantastic since you've yet to disappoint this far.
Good luck with the new endeavor. You'll definitely find me lurking around and checking in on your progress.
AC01 chapter 17 . 2/22
I am wholly pleased with your decision to maintain some realism with your approach to a "romantic" angle. Your interpretation of The characters is just so amazing that I can't believe you were able to convey so much on their behalf in a few words or key moments. Your ability to build upon the story with the appropriate kind of comic inserts, dynamic fight scenes, inner turmoil, mystery, and so much more really made this an incredible read.
And on top of that, I sincerely appreciate your knowledge of decent sentence structures, grammar, and proper use of descriptive terms. It's a shame how much even minor mistakes can detract from some stories that would otherwise be quite good.

I can't wait to read the alternate ending. I'll find you in the next sequel (in-progress, last I checked).
Guest chapter 2 . 3/13/2014 really turned Lex into a bitch. From what I gathered in the movie and such, she seemed quite honored and understanding of her mark and the link they shared.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/13/2014
Wow...u really turned Lex into a Bitchy
Melancholy Mistress chapter 5 . 1/13/2014
that was an awesome chapter :) omg im sooo obessessed with ur stories :)
KawaiPanda chapter 17 . 7/5/2013
You are amazing. :)
mr. eff chapter 18 . 3/27/2013
Reed is a dirty, dirty bastard and I hate his filthy guts. I absolutely love this story and I'm happy that you and CG made alternate endings, just like the previous one. It send my hopelessly romantic heart aflutter with the possibilities of the third installment.
Dee-em-elle chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Smithback chapter 18 . 9/1/2012
directly to the next one
Guest chapter 18 . 7/2/2012
I liked Tank as well, but Scale was a favourite before him.. I guess you introduced Tank a little late to be number one ;D

Thank you so much for always writing two endings, totally cool!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/2/2012
Perfect ending.
As much as anyone wants more romance, it just can't happen! Mandibles and height difference and claws and stuff.. it is better this way.
Thank you!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/2/2012
Great conflict!
Guest chapter 14 . 7/1/2012
Perfectly worded and ended so poignantly
Guest chapter 10 . 7/1/2012
I am so so enjoying this!
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