Reviews for Sacrifice Theory
lexia the beautiful wolf chapter 18 . 4/1/2019
im confused so did they not leave or is she dreaming again? love these stories i hope u continue it
RebelRatchet chapter 18 . 2/13/2019
Soooooo... is this chapter misplaced, or is it the beginning of a split in the story line from after chapter 15?
AstroNeko3000 chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
WTH? what's up with the ending?
Guest chapter 18 . 6/30/2018
NOOO! DON"T STOP PLEASE! Im LOVEING THIS!
Shiroi Kiba no Kyohi-ka chapter 18 . 4/21/2018
I was fortunate enough to find the second fiction of your series, and, by the time I am writing this, I was delighted to see a third that follows the story line.

In all honesty, it has been some time since I have seen and/or read a ficition of this calibre. I am thoroughly impressed with the in-character air the hunters/predators have. Most fictions written of this genre have a hard time staying true to form due to fangirl-isms and general impatience for a story to develop. I was pleased to find no such thing in your fiction, as well as the bond(s) between Lex and the other predators. It was slow and eventual, only forming after she earned the right to be as she was.

My only critic is that Scale's character seemed to take an odd turn. In the beginning he was the one who was more friendly with Lex, even touching her and aiding her while Tank was more reserved and rough with her. After Scar's incapacitation, he seemed to almost treat her with a bit of disdain while Tank was more friendly and gentle with her. In my mind, it just seemed like their character's switched their roles a bit; however, that could have been entirely intentional. In any case, the ficiton was great and this did nothing to hinder the story, but it was something that I thought I might draw attention to if you decide in the future to write more fictions, and if you do want to improve your writing skills at all. Otherwise, Scale was more of the quiet reserved character while Tank was more of the Jock type. It was amusing to watch him interact with Lex in an almost "older brother" way.

All in all, great read. I am also grateful for your friend's assistance in writing the character of Reed who I just absolutely loved to hate. Lex's internal struggles with her morality/humanity were also an interesting integration. Not many writers focus on the psychological and how it would change over time and exposure. Bravo for that.

I will now promptly start on the next fiction in the series.

Best Regards,

-Shiroi
eveyssoul chapter 6 . 1/31/2018
So she was willing to go with Reed...your lex is horrible! Lol
eveyssoul chapter 5 . 1/31/2018
I have no words about lex...Scar, Scale and the other Yautja should just leave her there. I just don't want them to die because of her obtuse and confusing self...
eveyssoul chapter 3 . 1/31/2018
So, she's a bitch to Scar but not Scale? Where's the logic? Lol sigh lex, lex, she's acting like she used him to survive and escape...
eveyssoul chapter 2 . 1/31/2018
Why is Lex being so damn rude? She wouldn't have really survived without them, especially Scar. I don't understand why people make her so nasty in fanfics or just a straight up bitch. She seemed to feel honored in the movie. I'm sure Scar and herself bonded through moments they didn't show...im baffled.
warriorgod626 chapter 18 . 8/1/2017
that was awesome man
Maka Ano chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
I need to sleep... but I found this series on AO3 nd now I just... I just CAN'T STOP!
Sleepyhallow01 chapter 18 . 9/13/2016
I loved all the characters and I loved the second ending .
Stunning Sunset chapter 18 . 4/3/2016
Much fun to read!
CrazyScaryPerson chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
OMG SEQUELS! Im really sorry i just now found out u had other sequels my bad. AND I LOVE THEM. SCAR IS BACK YASS. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
littlebirdy chapter 2 . 1/1/2016
... u just got a shotgun wedding of sorts Chica! X'D
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