Reviews for LockDown: A Different Side of the Fence
Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
Wow! I can't believe you're back. It really has been a LONG time! Viper209 messaged me in excitement just as I got the email to say you had updated. We couldn't quite believe it.
And yes, that was ages ago but I'm afraid I struggled with what to say in my review. I was so so excited that you came back, literally I was hyperactive, but this chapter did feel quite strange. I know it has been 7 years so of course things change and maybe I need to go back and read the story properly again, but this chapter felt a bit different. I can't really put my finger on what but it didn't quite feel right. Maybe I was just building it up too much after all these years! I'm not saying it was bad, geez no! It's you! But it didn't seem to flow that well and some sentences were so weirdly constructed and long and jumpy. It also seemed to jump about and everything happened very suddenly and choppily. It just didn't really feel like you writing somehow. Maybe that's cause you wrote it in parts over a long period and then quickly finished it to finally update?
I really hope this isn't too honest a comment, I really have vacillated over what I should write because obviously I am one of your biggest fans and it is AMAZING if you are writing again and I want you to continue soo much. But I also don't want to lie when I have waxed lyrical in the past about your writing and to do it now just cause you're back wouldn't be right when I really meant all of those other reviews 100%.
I mean it when I say I love your writing and I would love you to continue and I will see if I can get back into your groove! Also, did you get any of your real life books published?! I'd love to read them!
And finally, what I did enjoy in this was Julie being so damn funny! That was perfect! Her asking what the heck happened to him! Brilliant! I think the rest just maybe needed slowing down and more explanation of what had happened over the time that the chapter skipped to.
Hope you're not mad and great big 7 year hugs! xxx
gretss chapter 6 . 6/9/2013
i'm so glad you updated!
please continue it i'm really curious now! :D
char19 chapter 6 . 4/15/2013
you can't stop this now! pleeeease go on, write the next chapter! I want to know what Sandy will say to Kisten and I want them back together fully and completely...and for good! please don't stop writing!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/18/2013
I just randomly clicked onto O.C fanfiction and you've updated, you have no idea how long I've been waiting to read updates. I still re-read Rhyme or Reason and your other stories. I am so excited! The show is over but you write some of the best stories I know! Amazing. Made my day!
PA chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
great writing
gretss chapter 4 . 2/18/2013
this is amazing. i'm so glad you decided to continue it. i hope you'll upload a new chapter,it's very intriguing :D
TheNewpsies chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
OH MY GOD. So i was 15 when I read your fics for the first time and author alerted you. I am now 22 and freaked out a lot when I saw this update, AMAZING. PLEASE CONTINUE.
Whenever I think/talk about fic, I talk about trinity is god who wrote the most amazing stories for my first OTP.

Thank you.

*goes back to read everything for the *** time*
lpulverized chapter 6 . 2/9/2013
OMG! This story is totally killing me! I read the whole story and it is amazing! even though it is so sad how things turned out but I really like it...(btw carter should just disappear) :D

please update soon! I cannot wait to read more
viper209n chapter 6 . 2/7/2013
Wow. I literally could not believe it when I read the email that you had updated.

I had to go back and read from the beginning. While this story is killing me, thanks so much for writing it! It's hard to see our beloved characters in this situation but it is certainly interesting. Almost like a Twilight Zone episode.

Love Sandy's new look. Like, I know he got it in prison and that's bad. But he's so sexy. haha

Please update again soon. I need more insight into this Carter situation. (Ugh. ;) )
bananacupcakes chapter 5 . 3/29/2011
please update soon :)
kirsan chapter 5 . 3/8/2006
OMG! I CAN WAIT TO HAVE THE NEW CHAPTER ANYMORE, PLEASE KEEP GOING, POOS KANDY I LOVE THEM AND CERTAINLY HATE A LOT TO REBECCA WITH ALL MY HEART!
jambled chapter 5 . 2/3/2006
Wow. Fabulous. Very dark- I loved it!
viper209n chapter 5 . 12/10/2005
wow just read all of these... awesome... please continue unless its done but i don't think it is cuz i didn't see "complete" but you are a REALLY good writer bravo
Fighting-this-War chapter 3 . 8/23/2005
i'm loving this so far :) will read the rest when i have more time.

Oh and by the way (:D) my name is Rebecca and i assure you its R-E-becca :D not Rubecca :D lol. great story. x
Christine chapter 5 . 8/8/2005
Sorry its taken me so long to review i didnt notice that you hasd updated, so i apoligize for the long time between reviews, im always checking back to see if you've updated and somehow i missed this one. gawd, ah well ive read it now and was astounded as always.

One thing...I despise Samantha yo write her so mean i cant wait till Kirsten comes down and knocks her off that pedastol shes put herself on, i guess you intended for her to be disliked. Sandy mustve done somthing serious to her.

The voice inside Sandys head makes me chuckle. "She had some deep rage, she needed to see a therapist" and "Shes such a Bitch" straight to the point in his mind i guess.

I like how whenever shes wailing on him, he always thinks of Kirsten. Although the divorce paper route would be a good one to write in my opinion, because neither of them will want to sing them, he'll have mark give them to her and she'll demand to go and see him. Go Kirsten, that could make for some fun reading.

Anyway I hope you'll update soon were all waiting for you, take a choice out of which one you want to update, but personally: This story, Rhyme or Reason or The Sin, all amazing and al waiting for next chapters.

I promise i wont review so late next time, as a belated birthday present to me you could updare :) kidding. Hope to read a chapter soon

Toodles x x x
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