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Salutations!

Well done, well done. Unlike the angry complainers, I for one particularly enjoyed Ron as traitor. His resentment has been festering for years, he doesn't bring anything to the group, and he's annoying. He's kind of like Xander, if Xander was a ginger. Ew. XD

Thank you for your talent,

M. Newman

This story was fantastic! I have always loved reading things dealing with deep psychology, and this fanfic was one of the most interesting pieces I have ever read.

The delving into the mind of a person with DID was very interesting, frightening and saddening (most of all concerning poor Boy) and I will probably be re-reading this story many times.

Thanks for writing this, and Keep Up the Good Work!

Great story. I really enjoyed all the different personalities of Harry and how it could almost fit in with canon. What was the awful thing that James did that led to him being restricted by the other personalities?

Omfg that was AWSOME! I loved it! Reeeeaaaly good story !

This was an amazing story. I have to admit I was a little wary of reading it, but I am truly glad that I did.

Your writing is phenomenal. I appreciate how you kept the characters canon while placing them in such a different environment.

The humor you wove into the story was great as well. "Being generous seemed to give the potions master aneurisms." That was probably one of my favorite quotes.

Thank you for sharing your talent. I look forward to reading more of your work. Kudos :)

Kim

Wow, this was a really cool story. I do have a couple of questions though. One, did Ron tell Voldy about Harry's multiple personalities? Two, why was James so against giving his memories to Harry? Was it merely the whole thing when they showed Severus how things really were, or was there more than that? Three, had you gone with showing them completing the Animagus spell, what animal would they have been?

All in all, I thought that his was a well written and enjoyable story. I am sorry that Ron was made the villan, but I am also gla that there was a logical reason it could happen in cannon. Great job.

I remember I started this story a few months ago and said, "No, Harry having MPD is a horrible idea," and I x'd out. Then, I was searching through mentor fics to read and stumbled upon this one again, saved it to read later and finally got around to it (considering it was literally last on my long list, haha.) So, I started reading it and immediately went, "I'm sure I've read this already. I'm almost positive..." However I kept reading. And as I read, I slowly became fascinated with Harry's Tom and Harry's James as well as Harry's Foster. By half way through I loved this story!

Having 12 personalities is a little... unheard of... however it is magical MPD so I overlooked it. I finished the story in two days and I absolutely loved it! Draco's involvement was awesome! Severus' personality was spot on! Even Ron as a turncoat was totally interesting - even if I am a Ron fan. In the end, my favourite personalities were Potter and Tom and It and I LOVED your epilogue.

In short, the story was great. I'm only sorry I never read it in the first place... Haha. Amazingly creative story and very well executed xD

~Hekela

In the Epilogue, the voice that tells Harry happy birthday, then the saying that a door opens to the end - is that a fancy way of saying that it was the end of the story, or was that James relinquishing his memories? Speaking of James... Okay, so it's been a while since I've read any of the HP series, so forgive me if this is an answer that would otherwise be obvious. WHAT was James' memory - the one he had to hide from Harry? Thank you for hearing me out; any answer at all would be desperately appreciated! And though it has nothing to do with the story - God bless you.

-AMA

This story is amazing. You are doing a very good job at writing MPD realistically. :)

Awwww! :)

Most of the Harry with MPD fics are way to angsty but this one was perfect.

i so loved it i mean it was so awsome and amazing tuly, truly. i love sev, his personalities and james.

"Wow, you're really delusional," said Potter, with awe. "Now you think you're a lion tamer?"

Now that line is just SWEET!

Hi! First off, I'd like to say that I love this story. You've captured most of the characters' voices wonderfully, and I love how you've made both Severus and Draco into sympathetic characters, without losing what makes them Slytherin and themselves.

However, (and I hope I don't offend), I take issue with having Ron be the villain. I realize you've probably been blasted a bit for it already, but I'd like to lay out my (two) reasons in hopes that you'll find them worth thinking about in you future writing.

First, you mentioned in the author's notes of a previous chapter (not sure which one, sorry), that you had selected Ron to play the part of the villain as-per one of the 'rules of writing' - that the villain must have been introduced already.

While that is entirely true, it was intended for original writing. Applying it to fan fiction becomes tricky. I would say that the villain could easily have been any of the other students, given that while they have not been introduced in *your* story, we, as readers, nevertheless know that they exist. We have been introduced to them via the books/movie and even other fan fictions. For that reason, selecting Ron is... iffy, in my opinion.

My second reason relies on a 'rule' I myself was not introduced to until my script-writing course in college. You may not have heard it: "If you introduce a gun in act one, someone must be dead in act two." The corollary to this, is that if someone is dead in act two, the gun must be introduced in act one. Introducing Ron as the villain comes out of nowhere. An easy solution would be to add a few small moments,perhaps from Harry's perspective - an earlier introduction of Ron's strange letters, a lesson on the Questus Exulcero potion and a mention of Ron's reaction to it.

Finally, I'd like to say that despite my disagreement with your choice of villain, I really did enjoy reading this story. You are a talented writer, and I look forward to reading more of your work.