|Reviews for Welcome To Hell|
| Dreaming One chapter 20 . 4/10/2007
Uh, yeah, is anybody else sitting back going "BUT YOU RAPED HER!"
This is super dramatic these days. Whoa.
| Dreaming One chapter 19 . 4/10/2007
Lucius died...oh no. Oh Draco. Oh ~no~.
| Dreaming One chapter 17 . 4/10/2007
Oh my God. They are going to remember. Aren't they? Is that why they're sick?
| Dreaming One chapter 16 . 4/10/2007
I can't believe it was him. I can't believe he did that to her.
But...the memory charm?
Has she been faking it this whole time?
Holy shit. Has she?
| Dreaming One chapter 15 . 4/10/2007
Holy shit! She'd been waiting for DRACO? Wtf...this is weird. And I'm concerned. What the hell is going on? Is she going to get raped and attacked? Why doesn't Harry remember any of this?
Or, the way you're doing it, did it not happen this way the 'first' time?
Oi. Time travel confuses me. :P
THIS IS AWESOME!
| Dreaming One chapter 14 . 4/10/2007
OH MY GOD! What the hell is going on... Draco can't interrupt! The whole screwing with time thing!
Unless...he already did this. Originally.
Erm...ya. I know what I mean, that's the important thing. :P
| Dreaming One chapter 13 . 4/10/2007
Very clever of Draco to use the Room of Requirement this way!
| Dreaming One chapter 12 . 4/10/2007
"Tell me you love me..."
Aww, poor Hermione! Poor Draco!
Nice lemon. ;)
| Dreaming One chapter 11 . 4/10/2007
Draco's been awfully heroic lately, teehee.
The terrywinkle was creepy. o_O
| Dreaming One chapter 9 . 4/10/2007
| Dreaming One chapter 8 . 4/10/2007
That Hermione! Teehee, I can't believe she kissed him as a distraction. I am really incredibly curious as to what she knows and remembers.
| Dreaming One chapter 7 . 4/10/2007
Charming. It's this awful plot (meaning, an awful thing happened to Hermione) and yet this story is unstoppably charming. It's Draco, he's just hilarious. I love him!
| Dreaming One chapter 3 . 4/10/2007
" “Granger, what are you doing on top of me?” He asked, dazed and his head fuzzy.
“She fell asleep like that.” Dumbledore smiled. “As did you.” Draco’s eyes looked nervously around the room, afraid of exactly what each teacher was thinking in their adult porno minds."
HAHAHAHA! Adult porno minds...
"“B-But its already around the school!” Collin shrieked excitedly. Draco paled to an unhealthy color. “You’re a hero! And now everyone expects you to propose to Hermione at any moment and confess your undying hidden love for her!”
“WHAT THE BLOODY HELL - shit, do rumors always start like this?” Draco questioned. “Look – the woman can’t even remember her own less name, let alone who I am! Or who YOU are! She can’t even remember who Potter is! I DON’T have undying hidden love for the mudbl- muggle born! AND I suggest you get your facts straight before I get Crabbe and Goyle to smash your head in like a pumpkin!”
“Ooh, feisty words for a hero – modest.” Collin pulled out a second notepad from his robes and began to write frantically. “ ‘Draco Malfoy talks about his undefined love for Hermione Granger as a memory problem…’”
“That didn’t even make any sense!” Draco exclaimed. "
I think I love you! HAHAHA!
| Dreaming One chapter 2 . 4/10/2007
Your Draco is absolutely PERFECT. I swear: perfect. There were some hilarious lines in this chapter. He says the most ridiculous things in all seriousness...teehee, I wonder what Hermione does remember. Hmm.
Yikes, and who did this to her?
| Dreaming One chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
You my friend hav a way with dialogue. *grins broadly* That opening encounter between Hermione and Draco hooked me instantly.
"Draco had been sure that he had made everything clear to be the next Head Boy. His father had tried to pay Dumbledore off, but the big lug wouldn’t take the money. Who in their right mind wouldn’t take money? Draco wondered. "
Okay. That firt chapter? AWESOME. I mean, really, REALLY good. You hooked me instantly, there's no way I can avoid reading on. Your character portrayals are excellent...that's the best Draco I've read in a while. He's an ass, but he's human.