Okay, that last part didn't make sense at all. It was a cute story, though I feel it was long winded for the small amount of plot that was actually in it. And May seemed out of character the whole time. I've always seen her as more of a pushover than anything else. Not so mad like you showed her as.

I think that it's a really interesting idea to have Misty working at Wallace's gym. I really liked that, and Team Rocket's job was kind of cute too. I liked to story, it just needed a little work.

Ah, the nostalgia of it all.

Good job Togetic! I can't believe it evolved and that Jessie and James didn't know where Ash was being kept.

Finally, Togepi is back with its real trainer. All is right with the world again. Now it's time to see what Togepi is made of.

I knew this would be bad.

May! That selfish...ugh! I don't like where this is going with Team Rocket.

The tooth fairy? That's who they ran into! Finally,hopefully Togepi will be returned to Misty! Wallace is a dead man.

I should have known that's what May said to Brock. Well, Ash missed her a whole lot more than I thought.

I can't believe you allowed May to catch Misty's Togepi!

Ash, just forget about that and go talk to her already!

You are of to a really good start.

really good story!

lol wallace got owned big time!

aaml:)

This was a good story, even if the summary was inaccurate. 8/10

Gah Your reputation that preceeds you does nothing for you! You're an even better writer than I've heard! I'm also on serebiiforums and you're mentioned a lot round there...This has got to be one of the BEST fics i've read recently and I love it to pieces! Now...where are those sequels...

Wow, you so lost me on the last parts. . But, hey, YOU! Continue this fic... NOW! Thankies. Ja matta ne!

As Always,

wolf-girl87