Reviews for Critical Mass
ilikeREADIN chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Best story ever! To funny. Please make a sequel!
rachyzord chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
I love this story and shared it with my friend who also loved it. Diana and Lois just have too much fun being catty with each other but I can see them being flirty in a venomous way as well. Love it!
AllThatGlistens chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
That was pretty damn entertaining. Props for that.
magialuna chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
ROFLMAO. I don't know how you did it, but this is perfect... Not much else to say.. Maybe- sequel? lol -Clare
Ronnie K chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
I enjoy your writing. I've read a couple of your stories. You write good, crisp dialogue and your stories move along well. The premises are good too. You've got a flair for coming up with interesting plotlines.

The only problem I have with this story is that it started out really good and interesting, then it went to sexuality.

It takes away from what started as a very interesting story. Frankly, you're too good a writer to need to do that.

Having said that, I'll repeat that your writing is VERY good and I do enjoy your stories.